Reviews for Raspberries
Alejandra111 chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
OMG! I LOVE IT! hahahaha! This was GREAT!
loveisms chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
This was such a cute story!
Jenn chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
Wow. This was very good. All except one line that REALLY threw me out: "I was unable to look away from the rich chocolate orbs."

The "chocolate orbs" thing was kinda cliche and a little cheesy. But the _rest_ I really liked!

Jennie
xcullenette chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
wow. That was hot, great for you first try at anything smutty. It was also a very imaginative concept, I've never seen anything like this before. Keep up the good writing!
twi-ction chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
*gasp*

that was hot.

*scurries to find some raspberries*
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