|Reviews for Raspberries|
| Jenn chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
Wow. This was very good. All except one line that REALLY threw me out: "I was unable to look away from the rich chocolate orbs."
The "chocolate orbs" thing was kinda cliche and a little cheesy. But the _rest_ I really liked!
| xcullenette chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
wow. That was hot, great for you first try at anything smutty. It was also a very imaginative concept, I've never seen anything like this before. Keep up the good writing!
| twi-ction chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
that was hot.
*scurries to find some raspberries*