Reviews for Raspberries
Obsesive Reader chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
Here's one Bella soaked head to foot from the rain and she's wearing sheer clothing. Plus I love what you have done so far.
Heavenly Divine chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
My friends think that it would be a fantasy of Edwards to surprise Bella by deciding he would eat breakfast. Of course Bella will be confused because he is a vampire (no food) but little does Bella know that she is on the menu. Will you try it please? I think its great, unfortunately I cant write well so i hope you will consider this. Reply please.
obsessedmom chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
Sweet, sweet story and so yummy :o)
BamaBabe chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
I love this one! The build-up is perfect.
Eliph95 chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
oh this story is so kinky..alice was right [no duh] really cute too! lol..loved it! :)
greeneyedgirly chapter 2 . 5/23/2009
OMG...I honestly had no ideal where u were going with this at 1st but wow, that that too good. So innocent and so dirty at the same time...I loved it!
libbybelle chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
Sweet! And not just the raspberries!
kumoriko1 chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
This was so hot. I will never look at raspberries the same. :D Which is a shame because I love raspberries; it will be so trying (not! it will be awesome). :D Now, if you will excuse me I'm off to check out your other stories.
twilightxaddiction chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
wow that was hot:)
a-098jhkjh chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
LOL Edward is such a perv...
AllIHaveIsYou chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
Omg I watched a film yesturday called 'Lolita' (warped twisted film, yes,)

And the girl in it did this with the rasberries.

Greatest thing ever with Edward and Bella though.

M _
Romance and Musicals chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
That was really good!
L5472 chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
Heehee...oh Edward! Isn't he a darling? ;)
SignedAnon chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
lol...other parts of you...
LauraACullen chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
Yummy! Raspberries never tasted so good! Loved it!
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