|Reviews for These Dreams|
| Jasper's Darlin' Kathy chapter 16 . 4/3/2009
I am so stuck on this story. I just cant quit reading it. I am going to the next chapter. I really really really enjoy this story. Congrats again, Kathy
| Jasper's Darlin' Kathy chapter 14 . 4/3/2009
WOW! I really enjoyed reading Jasper putting Edward in his place. I am still Team Edward but Team Jasper is definitely HOT too! I am really enjoying this story. You are a wonderful writer. Congrats, Kathy
| LittleRed1985 chapter 14 . 4/3/2009
I was hoping to get this all read tonight and I hate that I can't. I love this story. So far you're doing a really good job picking up on all the characters. Huh, Bella lost it to Jake. Yeah I figured that was going to happen in the original books and for a bit I was almost hoping it would. I got over it though. I'm happy that Jake imprinted in this one, I don't think that I could handle more angsty triangles. :) I love Jasper in here; so protective of Bella. I think you got Irina to a T. I always thought she was an ungrateful bitch who didn't know where her true loyalties should lie. Wow that was kinda harsh. lol. When I read Bella's letter to Edward I actually started to cry. I felt like an idiot, because my sister was looking at me like I was nuts. I definitely appreciate the lemons here and there. I think it's really cool that you did one for Em and Rose. It seemed like something that I could actually see them doing. I know you said you had a hard time writing from Rose's perspective, but I thought it was good; just the right amount of bitchy. lol This version of Alice makes me kind of sad. I mean I'm used to Bella being all over the place, but Alice is always so happy and peppy and then for her to be in sweats is like "oh wow". Sorry I didn't review after each chapter, but you kept ending the chapters at places that compelled me to just move right on. lol. Not that it's bad...you just now have a really long review to read. Oh and I read the alternate chpter 13. I really liked it too. Sometimes I'm too easily swayed as to who should be doing who. I guess I'm just a sucker for good smut. ;) Although in my defense I read it before I started reading the actual story, so now I'm totally for B&E and J&A. Like I said I change my mind a lot. Either way I love both of the stories that you have on here nd hope finish "These Dreams" tomorrow. I hope you post some new stuff soon.
| Jasper's Darlin' Kathy chapter 5 . 4/2/2009
WOW! I just started reading this story and I am so hooked on it. I am really enjoying your story so far and I cant wait to get to the next chapter. Congrats on your story. Kathy
| Tammy7512 chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
Fav author suggested this story ... adding to read soon! Tammy ;D
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| Magnabones chapter 14 . 3/26/2009
This is a wonderful story!I cannot tell you how happy
i am to have found it!
| candyapplekissesxoxo chapter 25 . 3/4/2009
LOVED IT! :) the end was awesome I love how Jasper and Bella stayed friends and not in a romantic kind of way I am a Edward kind of girl all the way! Great story can't wait for more stories in the future!
| dawntwilight000 chapter 25 . 3/1/2009
You wrote a very good story. The story line was excellent and it was very well written. The Epilogue was great. I love how you ended it. Thank you for writing it and great job!
| aznblondie1218 chapter 25 . 2/21/2009
I really enjoy ur story.
Jasper is one of my fav character and it's so neat to have his pov. you really made his character come to life. great job D
| CSINYNut chapter 25 . 2/17/2009
This was an awesome story. Although I will say that I am a little disappointed that Jasper and Bella didn't end up together but very well done.
| LauraACullen chapter 25 . 2/14/2009
Very sweet ending!
| KNG1986 chapter 25 . 2/14/2009
Edward and Bella's homecoming was sweet and of course with Emmett and Rosalie quite funny. I'm so glad he didn't give her a hard time about eternity. It's good to see Alice happy again but the real star of this story is Jasper. You made me really love him. Thanks for sharing a wonderful reading experience. I did read it again at Twilighted while waiting for this chapter. I will continue when it's updated. I will save this and probably reread it again sometime.
| sihaya9 chapter 25 . 2/13/2009
I loved the story and the epilogue especially. I like how much more mature Bella becomes through your story version. I like how you integrated the characters from the original. It's sad that Alice is a bit insecure now but I always wondered if she might take Jasper for granted sometimes - just a little bit.
This has been one of the best new moon spin offs I've read and is my favorite!
Thanks for sharing your work!