|Reviews for Marble Doll|
| terra hotaru chapter 7 . 5/30/2009
Oh wow. A happy ending. Never would have expected that. this is truly a marvelous story. : D for those who don't like the happy ending could have just stopped in chapter 6 and those that like the happy ending, can read until chapter 7 and be satisfied. I sure enjoyed reading this fic and its setting. Very beautifully written. I'll be looking forward to reading more of your fics. you have a great talent in writing, that's for sure. i'm thoroughly intrigued. You should write fics in this setting more. I'll be looking forward to it. Best wishes on your future fics!
| terra hotaru chapter 6 . 5/30/2009
Wow.. you killed Roxas. I can't... well, it's not hard to believe, actually. : D I still don't know you as a writer, but this is definitely a good twist. I'm kinda sad, but at the same time like how this turns out. I wonder what the next chapter will contain. your description of sora shooting Xemnas and how Roxas is gasping for breath is so real and... beautiful.
| terra hotaru chapter 5 . 5/30/2009
Interesting. How are they going to kill Xemnas or Saix? or the other dude that I've forgotten? o_o this is a really interesting fic. I just can't get over the fact at how well this is written. I thoroughly enjoy this whole fic. Very very nice. : D And I can't emphasize enough on how well you've written the chracters.
| terra hotaru chapter 4 . 5/30/2009
Very very interesting revelation. Wow. you've planned this all very carefully. i love to see the development and really, the characterization are perfect and the mystery and the dark aura underneath this fic is amazing. I love the whole thing. this is quite a surprise to me, knowing that I'm a person who wouldn't be able to stand and read through a fic that's not going into full AkuRoku. but this one is really intriguing. I'm glad I didn't miss this genius of a fic. xD lol, and oh sorry about my way of speaking- I tend to be...influenced in terms of writing style when I read a great fic like this. Very thick with plot. : D awesome!
| terra hotaru chapter 3 . 5/30/2009
Interesting. I really like the plot. It's so mysterious and this sort of air into it. I wonder what's going on. You're really telling the story very well. I'm intrigued and I love all of the characterization!
| terra hotaru chapter 2 . 5/30/2009
I have a feeling the thief is the statue itself-coming to life-meaning, it's ROXAS! Hurray! I want to see Roxas' appearance! NAO! lol. I love this fic. So greatly written, it seems you've planned this out carefully and have done some research. It's very believeable, I have to tell you that. I don't know about inaccuracies, but I love it all. Your decriptions and the artwork and the dialogues, they are all very beautiful. It's as if I'm "watching" the entire fic being told. This is such a gorgeous fic. I'm surprised I never heard of this one before. Greatly written. x3 thank you! Next chapter, I go.
| terra hotaru chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
This is extremely well written! I love the situation and the settings that you put the KH characters in. And the older style of English that you spoke about-you've definitely ruled them out perfectly. I'm honestly sucked into this world that you've made, I feel as if I'm in the old English world myself, listening to all these formal talks. This is a really brilliant fic . I love how it's written and your writing style is golden. Very great job on this fic! I'm glad I decided to click and read this. :3 I'll be looking forward to read more!
| The mental patient chapter 1 . 11/28/2008
It was unique...I like it And the ending was nice as well lolz :D
| LupinandHarry chapter 7 . 11/2/2008
Fantastic story, I loved it! -
So cute, and I loved the era, I had never read a KH story taking place at that time, it was a breath of fresh air.
The only thing I would have liked to see more was some more Sora/Riku, but alas it wasn't really their story. Oh well, I still loved it!
| Kitty-chan and Nya-chan chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
wow. You must have put a lot of time in this! -
| Aly-Cooper chapter 7 . 8/2/2008
Lovely ending! The talking parts must have been a pain to write at times I'll bet. But you summed this up so nicely in your chapters.
A happy ending. Huzzah. Luffles ya!
| Swing-21 chapter 7 . 7/31/2008
nice story :) I found the ending a little too cheesy for my tastes, but the rest is interesting. Cookie points for all that noble talking, it must have been hard _
| The Lesser Verse chapter 7 . 7/31/2008
I love the story, its like a fairytale :). I noticed though that you married Leon to both Aerith and Riona. I wonder how he got away with that ;)
| CloudintheSky chapter 7 . 7/31/2008
| Sempiternal Goddess chapter 6 . 7/28/2008
Yay! I'm at the bottom of the chapter! I'll be SURE to read 'Intrigues' when you post it!