No wonder Draco is such a mess. He doesn't have a chance, caught between two unbreakable vows. I imagine Snape felt much the same way. The outlook is not good.

Ohhhh. I'm in heaven. The paradox is alive and well:
He had no Mark.
The jewels returned before they had been stolen.
Trying to do what was right, and it had still been wrong.
Pronouncing "valiant" as if it was the word "moronic".
Plus the fabulous ending: The place where it had all begun.

This is a MAGNIFICENT story, and I consumed it so quickly. I do hope you keep it going, I've never in my life read such an incredibly dystopian, detailed, and masterfully written story of this nature on . Literary. Art.

Your fic has absolutely captivated me. From Draco's characterization to the plot... I love it all.
Looking forward to more!

Thrilling, absolutely thrilling. I just know Hermione will save the day. Malfoy will survive. This adventure will surely build the trust they desperately need, although I must admit, I enjoy the constant friction between the two.

Amazing chapter. Luna is marvelous. I knew I always loved her for some reason. Now you've shown me why. Hermione is amazing too. Draco...scary, very scary.

My word. Your mastery of storytelling and poetic use of language is beyond wonderful. I wasn't going to leave a review, because after all, you have 847 already, but decided that it was only right and fair to contribute to its increase. This is truly an amazing story.

You're back!
This update has really made my day. My week even!

Amazing chapter though I'm afraid that the next update would be next year and I'll have to re-read the whole story again. It was really good. And as always, the word choices were amazing.

You accurately show just how intelligent and sharp Hermione really is. Great work and thank you for another wonderful chapter!

you updated! omaygad!

To this day, two years later, I am still basically praying for an update! I haven't given up hope! This is my favourite dramione story EVER. I'm not joking, I'm not exaggerating, its simply a fact. Please don't abandon it, its too amazing. I know it must take time to write such an incredible masterpiece but please, I am basically begging you, please don't give up! Please don't stop writing! You are an amazing writer and extremely talented and it would be such a shame for you to stop. I am so looking forward to the next chapter and I know it will be worth the wait. I hope everything's okay with you and I hope you don't give up xoxo

i realise it's been too long, but I'm still praying and hoping that you'll update this!

Please don't let this story go! I'm really enjoying it...

Here we are; chapter 14 and that's it so far, plain and simple. Jesus Christ, please come back and continue this tale! The characters are in so deep, and yet I feel as if the story has only just begun. I hope you will continue writing eventually. I was seatching for yet another Dramione story when I stumbled upon yours - and yes, almost overlooked yours, cuz it's only rated a "boring" T -and what a loss that would've been. Blazed right through all available chapters. Your story, obviously, is so much more than a simple Dramoine love story - if that at all - and I thank you for taking us on this journey. Your characters are intriguingly oblique, and thoughts of compartmentalising them into good and evil ill-advised. The war has clearly left a mark on everyone and no one's motives can be defined with certainty at this point, which makes it all the more interesting and exemplary in its attention to other characters. I'm interested to see why you choose to narrate parts not centred around Hermione and Malfoy in the present tense, when you otherwise employ the simple past. I'd love to find out what else you have (or had) in store for our heroes and non-heroes; this is clearly only the beginning of what has the potential of becoming an epic story and there are too many story lines you have only just picked up to make any genuine prognoses. I sincerely hope you'll come back to this eventually, regardless of how long it'll take. Thank you!