Reviews for Chocolate and Vanilla Swirls
Adelaide MacGregor chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
Cute!
Bells-n-Akira chapter 1 . 12/21/2009
awesomeness... The moment when he tells her who he is makes me giggle
kingka chapter 1 . 6/25/2009
cute! I knew it was Sano all along! I loved your description. I could picture the scenes clearly. Oh yeah, towards the end you mispelled Mizuki's name, but it's alright...you can still tell it's Mizuki. If you have time, please check out my Hana Kimi fanfic and review! .
Apple Juice and Candy Floss chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
HeHe..I loved this! You should write fluff more often!
Muchalu chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
OMG, that was really cute! I loved the fact that Sano was totally the staker and everything. Plus the line "I'll pay for the lady" had me laugh so much. Great story!
Teh-Energetic-Emo-Kid chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
I loved it! And wow! The ice cream truck just went by my house... UNFAIR! NO DEMON LORD! lol! But I loved the story... No mistakes!

YAY
astra-kelly chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
aw so sweet!
Neechan chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
OKAY. First off, it was great! _ I totally felt teh feelings of Mizuki! The description was cool too. I could imagine the whole thing without much effort, WHICH is good! Hmm...

_ This line...

""Oh, thanks, Nakatsu." Mizuki tried mustered up a smile."

Mizuki tried to muster up a smile* . . .?

Yep, that's all I've got! n_n Great job, neechan. You've got fluff skillz!