Reviews for Breezy
patiicm chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
The story was cute but what really made me laugh was what you wrote at last. I think your brain wasn't functioning that well at 2 in the morning. Don't worry. If I was there with you I would probably have been laughing with you everytime you said underpants.

KEEP IT UP!
biggest-twilight-fan chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
this was amazingly hilarious!

and underpants is a totally funny word.

way better than underwear.

good job!

:)
Dazzled For Eternity chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
hilarious! did you notice the innuendos? ...the clouds threatening to EAT the sky...diving headfirst into a vat full of tunafish would be fun... did you notice those, cuz i did. :D anyway, this is the 3rd gut so far thats been busted by your funny words, so im officially suing you. jk
Holy Frog 001 chapter 1 . 3/31/2009
I like that word to. I also lke this story. Kind of a random ending but hey! Randomness is a good thing!

ribbit!
Llama Mama23 chapter 1 . 3/17/2009
'My butt'

Nice.

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girl chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
haha, very good, do oyou ever condering trying to write fic by having alot of caffien and see what ensues a. tryign write a roamcne/coemdy when on that ot tragedy. whatever
signedsecret chapter 1 . 9/26/2008
rofl. your awesome :D
Merciless Ruby chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
LMAO! AW, poor Bella! This was hilarious!
twilight-lover23 chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
FUCK THATS WAS SO DAM FUNNY IT HURTS AHAHAHHAHA :D LMFDAO! [LAUGH MY FUCKING DAM ASS OFF!]
twinerd chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
funny :D
TheCullensareAwesome chapter 1 . 7/26/2008
LOL this was funny but are you going to explain why and how the dog got her jeans in its mouth? I am a bit confused? lol :)
MakeMeAWhitlock95 chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
lol... ur right underpants is funny! and it's even funnier when i imagine Edward saying it! D
xxAlicexBrandonxCullenxx chapter 1 . 7/11/2008
haha... I loved it. You are an amazing author.
harasnicole chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
That was funny. Personally, I can picture Edward being the type of...person, to use a word like "skivvies". :P

But underpants works, too. Heh.

Great story. Loved it.
Twihard275 chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
AHAHAHAHAHAHA!

OMG! U ARE SO RIGHT!

THAT WOULD BE THE FLIPPIN FUNNY
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