|Reviews for Loss and Victory|
| Fallen-Ryu chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
more please, also this is giving me ideas for my own black and white fanfiction...
| godofmadness43 chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
not bad, feel bad for that guy though. I actually have an idea for a character, i'll tell u on a PM
| Cerebrate Fate chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
Pretty darn good, especially for a sequel. Worthy of the original and good as far as grammar and spelling go (Heil Webster!). All in all, I'd say you are a good author. I must have more!
| Emmanovi chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
Aww, the thought of those trapped creatures... the good God in me is crying out for them to be freed.
And the evil God in me is quite excited by Saitaku's villager-ripping. Most excellently devilish of her. Hehehe.
Also, Toku "had unleashed a furious attack on the pillars and the enemy creature" - despite having only just settled in this land. Meh. Also, we're not told about this attack... in contrast to your past descriptions of Gods battling, which have been really enjoyable reading!