Reviews for Better Broken
candybkins1 chapter 15 . 23h
This was perfect, I really miss the Seifer and Hayner stories from you. They are always so well written and thought out, and you portray their chaacters perfectly.

Please write again soon!
xacilia chapter 15 . 5/17/2013
This is so heartwarming. Love love love your story.
S.RAYN chapter 9 . 8/14/2012
And...it happens
S.RAYN chapter 8 . 8/14/2012
Maybe I just notice these things because I'm reading it all at once, but Demyx couldn't have come last year because after that scene in the bathroom, it was six months later, then his mom had the baby two months later and died and now Haven's almost a year so it's been like almost two years... LMAO, he got Demyx finally, he needed a hit, lol. But that's probably not how he wanted people to find out that he loved Hayner.
S.RAYN chapter 7 . 8/14/2012
Totally like two parents, lol.
S.RAYN chapter 6 . 8/14/2012
Wow, thats so weird, I could have sworn in chapter 2 that Demyx was the kid with the weird hairstyle and guitar like instrument that walked into the bathroom when Hayner was cutting. On the other side, it seems Hayner's dad is still a jerk and had an affair before he even left them.
S.RAYN chapter 5 . 8/14/2012
Wow, just more and more unexpected things happening each chapter.
S.RAYN chapter 4 . 8/14/2012
Wow, it totally seems like this is going to turn into a story where they live together and raise a child together. The only thing missing is m-preg, lol.
S.RAYN chapter 3 . 8/14/2012
I'm a little confused on the names. Seifer's mom is Selphie who I thought her last name was Tilmitt. And Seifer's last name I thought was Almassy. And I really wasn't expecting that ending. I hope he doesn't take on a fatherly role or have to become an adult too soon or move in with the Dinchts? Oh, now i understand, Zell Dincht.
S.RAYN chapter 2 . 8/14/2012
Oh my gosh, I didn't see that part coming, either part, what happened or the cutting, depression. But at least Seifer is there for him.
S.RAYN chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
Nice intro chapter. I'm not good at reviews but I'll try to review each chapter I read.
SoulMore chapter 15 . 8/3/2012
FAN!
Gingergiggles chapter 5 . 4/4/2012
I love you.

I don't know who the fuck you are but I love you, I'm STILL cracking up over this chapter. XD I think some of your sentences are a little unnecessarily wordy but this is still the best hayner fic iv ever read. Cant wait to read the rest!
WindRush chapter 15 . 2/13/2012
This was soooooooo good! Seriously I absolutely loved it, you are a freaking genious! I especially loved any and all AkuRoku moments because they are my favorite couple(Seiner being my second)! It was so cute and amazing!
cryingcarebear chapter 15 . 5/31/2011
This was an AMAZING story! I love it!
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