|Reviews for Mr Perfect|
| The Iridescent chapter 12 . 7/29/2012
i'm faving this because of the seifell.
it's not like that i don't like irvinexsquall but i think you need to add more seifell in it. D:
hahaha that's okay. nice fic you write here!
| The Iridescent chapter 10 . 7/29/2012
i need more seifell.
| The Iridescent chapter 7 . 7/29/2012
hell yeah! this chapter is asdfghjkl.
i can't describe it in words. i'm too excited.
| blackmagicseal chapter 13 . 10/6/2010
Aw..the end.*happy can finish reading*
I think I wanna more~
| blackmagicseal chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
Wow..you give me another atmospher*grinned*
I can understand the story*nodded*
I like your story writting style(sorry if I have grammar mistake)
I'll read the next~
| Priestess of Silvanus chapter 13 . 7/25/2009
selhie's a bit oof a perve
| Silverstargirl chapter 13 . 7/25/2009
Selphie is so naughty! xD It's good to see all of them happy and satisfied :D
Great little fic!
| DarkBombayAngel chapter 13 . 7/24/2009
Love the ending. Very hot. -
| Hellcat81 chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
great first chapter. the story has a good feel. smooth read too. :)
| Friglit chapter 12 . 5/30/2009
I do sympathise with your position - after all there is noting worse than trying to write for a fic youve lost the interest in, but I really think you let yourself down with that ending. Finishing in this chapter would have been fine, but you really needed to have a sentence or two rounding it off as opposed to just slapping 'the end' on. I would strongly suggest re-editing this chapter. Like I said it wouldnt actually take much - just maybe a few lines in say Squall or someone's POV and have them reflecting how things are going to be better/interesting/ happier from now on would do the trick.
Sorry if this feels like a flame, but I just wanted to offer some advice as I enjoyed this story right up until this point and it seemed a shame to ruin it.
| DarkBombayAngel chapter 12 . 5/28/2009
I'm sad that it's over. The ending is good though.
| DarkBombayAngel chapter 11 . 4/27/2009
I love it so far! It's so cute and funny! -
| Priestess of Silvanus chapter 11 . 1/7/2009
this was great! hiliarious
| Syciara-Lynx chapter 11 . 10/25/2008
O pretty new review layout... *looks around*
Great chapter hun, im glad Irvy finally got some!
| Squishie-twin chapter 4 . 10/21/2008
I LOVE IT! _