Reviews for Mr Perfect
The Iridescent chapter 12 . 7/29/2012
i'm faving this because of the seifell.
it's not like that i don't like irvinexsquall but i think you need to add more seifell in it. D:
hahaha that's okay. nice fic you write here!
The Iridescent chapter 10 . 7/29/2012
i need more seifell.
The Iridescent chapter 7 . 7/29/2012
hell yeah! this chapter is asdfghjkl.
i can't describe it in words. i'm too excited.
blackmagicseal chapter 13 . 10/6/2010
Aw..the end.*happy can finish reading*

I think I wanna more~

thank you-
blackmagicseal chapter 1 . 10/6/2010 give me another atmospher*grinned*

I can understand the story*nodded*

I like your story writting style(sorry if I have grammar mistake)

I'll read the next~
Priestess of Silvanus chapter 13 . 7/25/2009
selhie's a bit oof a perve
Silverstargirl chapter 13 . 7/25/2009
Selphie is so naughty! xD It's good to see all of them happy and satisfied :D

Great little fic!
DarkBombayAngel chapter 13 . 7/24/2009
Love the ending. Very hot. -
Hellcat81 chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
great first chapter. the story has a good feel. smooth read too. :)
Friglit chapter 12 . 5/30/2009
I do sympathise with your position - after all there is noting worse than trying to write for a fic youve lost the interest in, but I really think you let yourself down with that ending. Finishing in this chapter would have been fine, but you really needed to have a sentence or two rounding it off as opposed to just slapping 'the end' on. I would strongly suggest re-editing this chapter. Like I said it wouldnt actually take much - just maybe a few lines in say Squall or someone's POV and have them reflecting how things are going to be better/interesting/ happier from now on would do the trick.

Sorry if this feels like a flame, but I just wanted to offer some advice as I enjoyed this story right up until this point and it seemed a shame to ruin it.
DarkBombayAngel chapter 12 . 5/28/2009
I'm sad that it's over. The ending is good though.
DarkBombayAngel chapter 11 . 4/27/2009
I love it so far! It's so cute and funny! -
Priestess of Silvanus chapter 11 . 1/7/2009
this was great! hiliarious
Syciara-Lynx chapter 11 . 10/25/2008
O pretty new review layout... *looks around*



Great chapter hun, im glad Irvy finally got some!
Squishie-twin chapter 4 . 10/21/2008
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