|Reviews for Public Indecency|
| PFChang'sChaiAppleCobblerIsYum chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
A great story. Very well written.
| SimplyKatKat chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
oh my gosh.. that is so funny.. hoping to read more.. really amazing..
| Foxy-Fire6677 chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
beyond funny more!
| water kangaroo chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
hahahaha this is great XD i don't usually read Twilight but I'm glad I made an exception ]
| phoegon chapter 1 . 11/23/2008
i got a good laugh from that it was great!
| Kamaria Aislynn chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
OMG! That was freaking fantastic! Little creepy with the butt eating grass thing but Charlie's reaction was gold!
| ARavenDetached chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
lmao that was halarious. please write more
| Miss Whoniverse chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
| oh.holy.martel chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
Yes... you must add more pranks... SO FUNNY... would die of laughter, except then I wouldn't be able to read the next chapter...
| cat97 chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
omg that was the funniest thing
| jbthatsme33 chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
HA! OMEC THAT WAS FREAKING HILARIOUS
| PlayingEdwardsPiano chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
Omg so hilarious!
plz write more this si great i was wetting myself
| TwilightEdwardBella95 chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
u should. poor edward.
| Eternal Texan 8D chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
Jasper is mean! but good storie
| addicted2twilight88 chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
That was hillarious! I'm lmfao right now... if you know what that means.