|Reviews for When Everthing's Gone Wrong|
| silvershadow98 chapter 3 . 8/28/2012
PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY! I know it's four years later and maybe you're 'too mature' for twilight but you are a brilliant author and I would love for you to continue the story; PLEASE!
| incoherantreality chapter 3 . 3/9/2009
when is this story going to be updated? i'm curois is all. apart from that its really good. however i do think you need to spell check a bit more and proof read it a bit (this is in regards to the first two chapters)
Peace out and keep writeing
| EmmettismyHUGEteddyBEAR chapter 3 . 2/21/2009
I loved it! Update soon please!
| rowdyk27 chapter 3 . 1/28/2009
PLEASE UPDATE! I'm absolutely in love with this story line!
| alwaysalice5 chapter 3 . 1/14/2009
| Stargirlrox chapter 3 . 11/11/2008
:D That's an AWSOME beginning! I can't WAIT to read the rest!
| Stargirlrox chapter 2 . 11/11/2008
I'm glad Edward came back when he did! Things might've gotten a lot worse otherwise!
| lovexisxamazing86 chapter 3 . 9/30/2008
| tsumesgirl05 chapter 2 . 8/7/2008
so far i like it. update soon
| Lahari chapter 3 . 7/12/2008
thnz for updating
| yessibby chapter 3 . 7/11/2008
wow!this is interesting(:
update as soon as you can
| bellaXXtheXXklutz chapter 3 . 7/11/2008
Can't wait to read the next chap. I love it when people do Edwards point of view in stories!P
| Me Bored.inc chapter 3 . 7/11/2008
ya it is love the chap cant wait repost soon
| DahliaPeesly chapter 2 . 7/11/2008
A little fast paced, and some mistakes but other than that it was good. Please continue. I hate Jacob even more now!
| DahliaPeesly chapter 1 . 7/11/2008
-grabs pitchfork and beats Jacob to death with it- I like your fanfic, sad though. Poor Bella, anyways please continue!