Reviews for When Everthing's Gone Wrong
silvershadow98 chapter 3 . 8/28/2012
PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY! I know it's four years later and maybe you're 'too mature' for twilight but you are a brilliant author and I would love for you to continue the story; PLEASE!
incoherantreality chapter 3 . 3/9/2009
when is this story going to be updated? i'm curois is all. apart from that its really good. however i do think you need to spell check a bit more and proof read it a bit (this is in regards to the first two chapters)

Peace out and keep writeing

Incoherant reality
EmmettismyHUGEteddyBEAR chapter 3 . 2/21/2009
I loved it! Update soon please!
rowdyk27 chapter 3 . 1/28/2009
PLEASE UPDATE! I'm absolutely in love with this story line!
alwaysalice5 chapter 3 . 1/14/2009
Stargirlrox chapter 3 . 11/11/2008
:D That's an AWSOME beginning! I can't WAIT to read the rest!
Stargirlrox chapter 2 . 11/11/2008
I'm glad Edward came back when he did! Things might've gotten a lot worse otherwise!
lovexisxamazing86 chapter 3 . 9/30/2008
tsumesgirl05 chapter 2 . 8/7/2008
so far i like it. update soon
Lahari chapter 3 . 7/12/2008
thnz for updating
yessibby chapter 3 . 7/11/2008
wow!this is interesting(:

update as soon as you can
bellaXXtheXXklutz chapter 3 . 7/11/2008
Can't wait to read the next chap. I love it when people do Edwards point of view in stories!P
Me chapter 3 . 7/11/2008
ya it is love the chap cant wait repost soon
Peesly chapter 2 . 7/11/2008
A little fast paced, and some mistakes but other than that it was good. Please continue. I hate Jacob even more now!
Peesly chapter 1 . 7/11/2008
-grabs pitchfork and beats Jacob to death with it- I like your fanfic, sad though. Poor Bella, anyways please continue!
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