Reviews for Mattie's movies
Steamboat chapter 8 . 12/24/2016
Nice story, but it desperately needs proofreading! At times it was almost impossible to read.
julie20007 chapter 5 . 8/6/2008
Hi again, I've copied this chapter and I'm currently editing it, it's the first chapter that has needed to be edited and I'll email the edited version to you later tonight.
julie20007 chapter 2 . 8/6/2008
Again, good chapter, I'm not gonna pull this one off either
julie20007 chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
Hi Dominque,

This is a great start, I can see fewer spelling and grammatical errors than what have been in the chapters that you've sent me. I think that this is the best start yet and I won't be pulling this one off to change as nothing really needs changed. I love it so far, keep up the good work
swimERfanatic13 chapter 8 . 7/28/2008
Loved it!
Bookworm0485 chapter 8 . 7/28/2008
Good Story.
starryeyes10 chapter 6 . 7/24/2008
great story
starryeyes10 chapter 5 . 7/22/2008
great story
swimERfanatic13 chapter 5 . 7/21/2008
swimERfanatic13 chapter 4 . 7/18/2008
so sweet! Love it!
achaon chapter 4 . 7/16/2008
You need to double space and use the spell checker. It's too hard to read.
leyte chapter 3 . 7/12/2008
The story is great but what about Lt. Slime (also known Lt. Vukovic)? I would like to read about Harm and/or Mac humilating Bugme and him alone or together. It would be FANTASTIC!
calimary chapter 2 . 7/10/2008
This is cute! I always loved the Mattie storyline and wished that TPTB had done more with it, they certainly could have. Keep up the good work and thanks!
swimERfanatic13 chapter 3 . 7/10/2008
Love it cant wait to read when mic comes! gonna be interesting!
swimERfanatic13 chapter 2 . 7/9/2008
I love it!
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