Reviews for A Girl Named Akatsuki
Guest chapter 7 . 1/7/2014
Sex is good but in retrospect "what the fuck am i reading" came into play lots of rapeage im guessing, the OC was bland at best and the ending damn, at least theres some closure
Guest chapter 7 . 9/22/2013
Reading through most of this whole series I loved the sex scenes... But the storyline was lacking and the ending so atrociously lazy and boring
Kittehgirl chapter 7 . 8/27/2013
I kindaa wanted her to show off her powers .A. but.. I enjoyed this and i applaud you for your efforts thank you very much!
TheNewBlueMoon chapter 7 . 7/11/2013
Wow. That's all I have to say. But in a good way though
IAreTheOne chapter 7 . 11/20/2012
hmm...
Kerra-Chan chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
i like it it was awesome
Ran chapter 7 . 11/16/2011
Umm...okay...? First the Akatsuki is a whore-house, then you have random members raping your OC for no reason who later turns into a sex-slave? I find that VERY unlikely to happen as well as OOC on the Canon characters part.

This has got to be the worst Akatsuki fic out there because I don't know if this is just a Mary-Sue, self-insert thing or a fangirl's sick and twisted fantasy that was solely written out of your amusement. Either way, this is extremely horrible and should be removed so others eyes and sanity are spared from this mess.
Ran chapter 7 . 11/16/2011
Umm...okay...? First the Akatsuki is a whore-house, then you have random members raping your OC for no reason who later turns into a sex-slave? I find that VERY unlikely to happen as well as OOC on the Canon characters part.

This has got to be the worst Akatsuki fix out there because I don't know if this is just a Mary-Sue, self-inset
ColorfulSkittles291 chapter 4 . 10/15/2011
I'm starting to like it.
ColorfulSkittles291 chapter 2 . 10/15/2011
Eh...
ColorfulSkittles291 chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
Hm...I'll keep reading
ChibiFangirl chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
Ah, nice plot line. Very depressing. I'm writing something similar, but there is actually a love intrest.
Dreams of Shadows chapter 4 . 1/21/2011
Deidara is a year younger than Itchy-chan!
XxXMiiDNiGhTXxX chapter 7 . 12/2/2010
nice story!
XxXMiiDNiGhTXxX chapter 4 . 12/2/2010
Great chapter!
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