|Reviews for The Ties That Bind|
| Hidden Relevance chapter 22 . 9/10/2008
Man great job piecing all the plot points together! It really made this story flow well!
As always, you did a fantastic job with the characterizations too.. It really felt like an adventure we might have seen in the series!
| Mahsa FF chapter 10 . 7/20/2008
Well, I have to say I very much enjoyed reading my next installment of this story. I patted myself on the back because I had my suspicions about that Jake character in the beginning, and it looks like that's confirmed. Heh. Now I'm finding myself intrigued by the mysterious disappearing Grace, and hm... That locket. Might her son be someone we know...? And, how are you going to manage to keep that gold shipment safe? Very fun to read, full of juicy puzzles. LOL I'll be back for more later! Mahsa
| Mahsa FF chapter 5 . 7/12/2008
I think I may have told you this before, but I enjoy the western "twang" to the voices in your story - there's not too much of it, not too little, but just enough for atmosphere. I think that may be my favourite part of the story, just hearing them say things like "the old dog was still kickin'" and reading it to myself in a western accent LOL
But I also thought Buck's dream/vision in in chapter 4 was quite chilling. And... I'm wonderin' about this Jake character. Hm...
Very nice story so far. Hope to read the next half soon! Cheers, Mahsa