|Reviews for The Pale Moon's Love|
| Midnight's Falling Star chapter 15 . 9/3/2013
Please update soon. T-T
And bring Naruto and Hinata back together. My heart, she cries for those two.
| Mistress Saturn1 chapter 15 . 2/2/2013
I love your story, I hope you can update it soon.
| Wyrd42 chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
In case nobody else has pointed it out, it's 'nee-chan, not nii-chan. Nii means older brother.
| MonsterFrolic chapter 15 . 11/30/2012
Hope ya get back soon.
| Guest chapter 15 . 11/10/2012
I just wanted to review to say that I had enjoyed your story so far, even though I didn't agree with the direction it had taken. In the initial chapters, the story was interesting and I loved how you handled the NaruHina moments. But as you went on, there were fewer moments like that. Since the plot was good, I didn't mind so much.
However, I really have to say, that I didn't like Ichi one bit. And I detested the way Hinata handled her situation with Ichi as well. So, if you ever do decide to rewrite this story, can you somehow take Ichi out of it? Just a request.
| Guest chapter 15 . 7/17/2012
This is actually one of the better stories I've read in a long time; I don't know if it's because I'm picky or what but I quite like this one. I'm glad I'm just finding the story though because I feel like I don't have as long a wait as the readers who have been following this story from the start. I look forward to your return
| Guest chapter 15 . 7/12/2012
Ill be alerting this and favoring this one so when you update i will know immediately and can read the new chapter i wanna know if naruto finally gets hinata or he has to run away with her... or get her pregnant :D
| Albericus chapter 15 . 4/8/2012
This story is incredible. The best NaruHina I've read so far. The plot makes sense, you meld it well with the original storyline, nothing feels forced and it is a pleasure to read your lines.
Drama, romance, cliffhangers!
With the soundtrack of "The last Samurai", it's just perfect and it is a warm sight for a sore hearth.
So, please. I beg you. Keep writing this wonderful story.
| ranneal chapter 10 . 3/3/2012
Loved the chapter...the first kiss scene was great too! Great writing.
| ranneal chapter 7 . 3/3/2012
Great chapter! I would have loved to see Hinata take out Kiri...that would have been great to see what you could have done with that with your writing ability. After all Kiri was out after her man.
| ranneal chapter 4 . 3/3/2012
Super chapter...very fun to read and a roller coaster ride of emotional scenes for our favorite couple.
| ranneal chapter 3 . 3/3/2012
Another wonderful chapter! Great romance and action in this one. It's cool to see the progress of the Naruto's feelings. Great writing all around.
| ranneal chapter 2 . 3/3/2012
Wow! This chapter was a piece of great writing! I haven't read any other reviews of it, but to me this is the best written description of a ninja battle that I have read. You didn't waste words on unimportant details yet it was so well described that I could 'see' the action in my mind's eye. You also did a great job with Naruto and Hinata...I love those two together. You hit a home run in this chapter. I am up way to late reading because I couldn't stop. (I have work early in the morning.) Thank you for sharing your talent...and providing some great entertaining writing.
| ranneal chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
Wonderful beginning chapter. The way you present the characters Hinata and Naruto is super as are the interactions of all of the characters. I'm gonna keep on reading!
| Gaiseric chapter 12 . 1/19/2012
Not a bad chapter for the most part, though I have a real issue with the reaction from Tenten in regard to Neji's actions. She barely even bat an eyelid in response to Neji's betrayal. I mean, I know she loves him, but knowing what happened with Sasuke, regarding Naruto as a comrade and friend, and then having Neji do exactly the same thing, I would think she would be more than pissed at him...though she would eventually forgive him. Instead, it's brushed off like it's inconsequential. Not good!