Reviews for Captive
Winged Demoness chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
This is a little different from what i'm used too but in a good way so great job!
ba chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
good story
UsuakariTOT chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
Yay! This was all very hot, hot but well-written, which is nice. I was very excited to see Marik submissive (he's such a psychotic little bitch). I usually write him as a uke, but not many psychoshipping writers do, so thank you for indulging me!

UsuakariTOT
Tenshi no Toki chapter 1 . 7/11/2008
Kyeeahh! Super adorable uke Mariku! I love it, I love it, I LOVE IT! Especially when he's submissive to Bakura, that's just icing on the cake. Oh...and when I say adorable, it doesn't mean what you think it means. I call anything I like adorable. Like, anything.

...But, Mariku's eyes aren't green...unless there's some special lighting that makes them green...but what plus dark purple equals green? Atata, mindless observation.

It's wonderful, WRITE MOAR NOW :O
Cliscia chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
I fangasmed all over this, and maybe a little more.

HOLY FUCK IN HELL. YOU CAN TELL HOW MUCH I LIKE IT

DUE TO MY CAPS LOCK.

Except Mariku's eyes aren't green. D:

Ftw?

And don't insert random Japanese words into your

fic. I'm reading English, thanks.

Submissive!bottom!'uke'!Mariku fucking wins.

Especially since no one ever writes it,

so my mind is clouded by

inane ramblings that I can't form a coherrent review.

Imagine that I spelled that right.

If you ever write a Yuugiou fic again,

I'd be glad to BETA.