Reviews for Vampire Heart Attack
Emerald Eyed Wolf Girl chapter 1 . 4/25/2013
KataraLovesAang chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
wow alsome story
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
Ahhhhhhh...I love this story it is so sweet!
ginnyharryclois chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
Wow Great story. Very well written
AlicelovesJasperForever chapter 1 . 12/8/2010
good story
blb1000 chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
An interesting typo (?) in the third line, "I couldn't find the right one to satisfy my thrust" (versus thirst). : )
rachael-cullen222 chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
loved it. please do an epilogue-soon! -xoxo
SharkGurl chapter 1 . 9/8/2009
short but nice.
EnglandDoll chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
I lovee it!

i wish something like that will happen to me..

No such luck

bleed2feed chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
Aw that was so cute _
Kitten-the-Wolf chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
I like it. You should make a sequel.
perpetually chapter 1 . 11/21/2008
That was awfully sweet. I loved it, with the exception of some grammatical errors. Wow, they move fast but nevertheless, it was lovely. Brilliantly written!
jetblackbaby chapter 1 . 9/10/2008
*dies laughing*

Ok. I know I'm really on your back, but, get a grip. And your own voice. Everyone out there needs to stop trying to mirror Stephenie Meyer and get THEIR OWN STYLE.


And. Again. Use spell check.

Also, when you go into detail, like I said above, stop trying to be Stephenie. It's proven in the way you described Edward's blood lust. Find your OWN voice. Because trying to hijack someone elses makes it sound horrible.
TwilightEternity017 chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
great story..interesting i might say should keep writing more
Cumberbatch-has-a-Sexy-voice chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
Thank you. :)
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