Reviews for Debris
amgglekim chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
It so totally didn't suck! I laughed and giggled... it was great!
DelilahTCullen chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
i dont think it suked i thot it was totally funny and tho dirty, defiantly cute
lillysora chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
Hanna Rae chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
haha that was so good! i love to read about edward's fantasies ;)
Balerion chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
I would like to respectfully disagree with you. I really liked Raspberries but I love this one. The fantasy is clearer and there is more sexual tension, not just innuendo.

Raspberries was cute, this is HOTT.

You should do a fantasy series. Getting more hard-core wouldn't hurt either, you got skillz.
xcullenette chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
haha! I loved these one-shots! How can I not love a horny and flustered Edward? More, please. XD
padfootly chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
Bahaha, I could actually see Bella maybe doing something among the lines of this, but blushing the whole way through.

Another fantasy of Edwards?

He's always liked her legs, or made note of it when he was helping her with her shoes in Twilight, I think. That should give you something to work with. 8D
Dead.Sexi.Zashley.Fan chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
I LOVE THIS! Its amazing..

I think the ultimate fantasy for Edward would be to see her in a bathing suit. I could see Edward going wild!
The Real Blue Eyed Demon chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
I loved it. I just want to get Edward to myself, just an hour, a day, forever...
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