|Reviews for Debris|
| lovetwilight4ever chapter 1 . 9/24/2009
omg dad was cool!
| intensewhatever chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
I loved this story! It was so cute and...I don't know. But I loved it! Lol! :)
| Michaylalove chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
LMAO that was hilarious that was awesome
| obsessedmom chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
what are you talking about? This was as good as 'Rasberries' if not better!
| i'm random girl chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
i liked this, i thought it was very creative :)
| bg chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
Fun story who knew Edward was an ass man.
| kumoriko1 chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
As I was reading the up down up down left right left right I keep hearing the Schoolyard Heroes song in my head. Up Up Down Down Left Right Left Right Secret Contra code for extra life. Joking aside, I think you're right. It's not as good as Raspberries but still cute. I like reading this from Edward's point of view. It's different from all of the Bella point of views. Alright let's see, smut, smut, ideas for smut, well there's the standard school girl kink, bondage, they could be painting something then paint each other, reading a play but they haven't read it before so Bella's reading the girl's line and Edward's reading the boy's lines and it gets ahem mature, okay, that's the extend of my smut ideas.
| thebestmenarefictional chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
I don't think it sucked at all. So what if they're OOC? I've seen stranger fanfics. Besides, I like devious Edward and mischievous Bella.
| brown.eyed-kid chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
hilarious! wow, dirty talk bella.. hmm..
| FallenFaerie.withTatteredWings chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
oh man... best part is... I can totally see this happening... lmao
| L5472 chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
*whines* I wanna clean his car! LOL. *runs to dump dirt on his seats* ;)
| Bella91387 chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
Oh good lord, I was crying I was laughing so hard, great job.
| Melinda the Proud Bookworm chapter 1 . 3/13/2009
I'm crying tears of laughter here. So freakin' funny!
| LauraACullen chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
This is cute, sweet, funny, and sexy. I like windows into what turns Edward on about Bella. And I loved her taking control of the situation there at the end.
| eglantine16 chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
lol. I like this. It's cute. )