Reviews for Paradise
Myktison chapter 1 . 3/8/2014
That's different, I've not read a Rayne yet where Jayne- in a way- "forces" himself on River. But it was good :) Great ending ;D
Tince chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
Wonderful!

Usually River's the one to initiate the kissin' (as Jayne would say) in most fics, but this was a great way to turn things around.
neisprime chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
WOW. This is a WONDERFUL story and a spectacular first kiss.
SusanMarieS chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
awesome. can't believe i missed this the last time i looked at your profile. thanks a bunch.
Marie Masen186 chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
I liked this story a lot! Well done!
Elliesmeow chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
Liked Wash's last line there. Most appropriate. And River's "fear is the mind killer" made me lol!

Very sweet, thanks for posting this here.

-Ellie
Eliche chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
Very nice really enjoyed it
masey chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
yah, rayney goodness.

I hope there is more story to come, enjoyed it very much.

Well done.
VerityFrancesB chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
oh I love it! So cute.

THank you

V!

xox
BobtheFrog chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
I absolutely adore the metaphor of Wash's words at the end...so good! Thank you so much for this fic...very intriguing!
Anya chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
FEAR IS THE MIND KILLER! Woo! I love Dune :) great use for it, great story!
Roxie156 chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
Oh Wash, we miss you so. Anyway, back to the point. God dammit you write crazy well! beautifully done

Sarah x
AveaJene chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
YAY! More stories from Lady Cleo! Your Rayne's are amongst my favorite fanfic.
Ali chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
Paradise indeed. Wow, when you come back, you come back wtih a Bang. I loved this. :)Ali
Azamiko chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
Yay! I like 'hidden-in-plain-sight' relationships!