|Reviews for I'll Be Watching You|
| jenilee chapter 5 . 8/14/2008
Dean knows when his brothers scamming him..lol I liked Dean's phone going off behind him. That must of been a surprise.
| jenilee chapter 2 . 8/13/2008
Oh wow I didn't even know you were posting this!
Helping out in a shelter and with children's protection; sounds like Heather is really trying to turn over a new leaf and make up for her past mistakes.
| PsychicWonderKitty chapter 14 . 8/12/2008
Ah, finally! So glad Missouri was able to convince the boys to clear the air at last, Dean confessing his guilt over the fact that he hadn't protected Sam from Heather all those years ago and nearly failed to again, Sam assuring Dean that it wasn't his fault...and in turn, Sam confessing the guilt over what had happened with Heather, all that she had done to him in both the present and when he was 15, and Dean assuring him that he did nothing wrong either time, he was her victim pure and simple, and he had nothing to be ashamed of. That was just what both boys needed to get back in the game again.
But I can see where Heather would still be lurking in the shadows of their minds, and as you said you intended, I never figured her out...I don't know if she's reformed, I don't know if she's still evil, if she's still keeping her eye on Sam in order to protect him or to get another shot at him...I JUST DON'T KNOW! LOL. So once again, kudos to you two on a brilliantly written villainess who may not even be a villainess anymore...who knows! Looking forward to another installment with the walking talking enigma that is everyone's favorite psychic vampire/succubus if you decide to do one!
And also, looking forward to anything else you gals have to offer too, great job once again! :-)
| Floralia chapter 14 . 8/10/2008
Well I’m sad to see it end. Again. I think this is one of those rare sequels that totally lives us to expectations, and even pushes past them in some areas. You do such a good job of portraying Sam’s mixed up feelings. The emotional aspects of the story are always dealt with in such a sensitive way, even if the physical takes on a life of its own at some points.
And Heather got away again. She’s such an interesting character, and one you don’t some much love to hate as hate to love. I believe that she does genuinely want to do the right thing, and while she initially tried to fight her own desires she got pulled back in against her will much like Dean did. But there is a darker side to her character too that just doesn’t want to be denied. It’s interesting to have an antagonist that has so many layers, and I am constantly changing my mind about how I feel about her.
| domino chapter 14 . 8/9/2008
This was DISGUSTING. Heather raped Sam physically and mentally and there are no consequences for this. Every character SAYS that Heather did something wrong, but the whole tone of you story is that she didn't really. The whole thing had the tone of those romantic comedies where someone's cheating on their significant other-oh, sure it's wrong, but not really *wrong* and how dare anyone oppose their TWOO LUV.
How dare Missouri say it wasn't really a sex act? How dare you act like her actions in any way had redeeming value? I am absolutely disgusted by this story. If this had been the story of psychic vampire incubus named Henry and Samantha Winchester, people would be hitting the roof. The double standard expressed here is astonishing and disappointing.
You make it sound like she'll be some sort of secret guardian, protecting him from the demon, and that make what's done ok. You say that she truly loved and cared about Sam, and that's why his plan then worked and why she broke the link. As if that makes it acceptable. She is disgusting and this story excuses and celebrates this perversion and I don't have the words to express my disgust and contempt.
The authors' notes at the end clinches it. "We finished another tale with Heather and she escaped again! The naughty girl!" "Naughty"? Oh, what a naughty rapist pedophile! "Is she good, is she bad, will she ever leave Sam alone?" "Is she bad or good"? She *raped* Sam and has permanently messed with his head. What she did eight years ago was sick.
You said: "It had to make for uncomfortable reading in places but hopefully it made sense in the context of the story." And yes, some of the things that made me uncomfortable were fine within the context. I'm not bothered by the Dean/Sam sex scene. You justified it.
I'm extremely disappointed because you are engaging writers and you could have dealt with these issues in an interesting and thought provoking way, but you didn't. I read the whole story to make sure that I wouldn't be judging you before I had a chance to see how the full themes played out.
I know you're reading this thinking, "If you were so offended, why didn't you stop reading?" It would not have been fair to determine how you were going to deal with these issues and I also wanted to give you the benefit of the doubt. I have absolutely no interest in any more Heather stories nor any other story that you write.
| BlueEyedDemonLiz chapter 14 . 8/9/2008
Beautiful guys! I've been looking forward to reading this last chapter for the last few days but have been caught up with RL - my sister and her family have just moved back to England from Germany and so we've been busy helping them.
Anyway this was gorgeous and there's to be more? Best news ever!
I've truly loved this and can't wait to read more - from you both together and as individual writers. Liz x
| sammygirl1963 chapter 14 . 8/9/2008
Awesome ending, though I don't like the fact that Heather was never really made to pay for what she did to Sammy. At least now he can protect himself from her sionce Missouri taught him how to shield himself. YAY, Sam finally opened up to Dean about making himself sicjk and found out Dean didn't blame him-Sammy so needed to hear those words from his big brother to make everything right between them..
Gotta say thjat I would love to see another sequel where Heather finally pays for what she did!
| spnMom chapter 14 . 8/9/2008
Aw, I am kind of sorry to see this story go. I really liked this story a lot. It was hot without being too much (at least for me :-). Dean actually opened up to Sam a bit and allowed a chick flick moment; love that! Thanks for a great story.
| PhoenixDragonDreamer chapter 14 . 8/8/2008
Gah! This was so awesome! And a happy ending! YAY!
Hope the next one involving Heather involves alot of her bleeding to death on the floor...
Thanks for another fun ride guys!
| sairah chapter 14 . 8/8/2008
A great final chapter to close another fantastic story from you both. Its been a pleasure to read from start to end. Spot on characterisation, a real sense of tension throughout and a brilliant character in Heather. I like a story that can push boundaries with its plot lines and this did exactly that. Tough subject matter, sensitively handled. Look forward to Part Three.
| skag trendy chapter 14 . 8/7/2008
Uncomfortable? Maybe but in a good way. What's the point if we aren't encouraged to leave our comfort zones occassionally? And you know what a kinky bi*tch I am! Eh Clowns? Wink, wink, nudge nudge.
Great concluding chapter and I loved the talk between the boys, and of course where would we be without our brotherly hug?
Superb girls! Can't wait for another sequel? (coyly batters eyelashes - and I rarely do that!)
| carocali chapter 14 . 8/7/2008
Biggest chick-flick EVER! Ouch, that was painful for both boys to admit all that had happened. But I'm so glad they did.
This was a little hard to read at times because your descriptions were SO amazing. I'm not one to really read 'sex' but your story was incredible so I figured I'd muddle through. :D I don't regret one minute of it (and I think I learned a few things) ;p
You two really pair up well and compliment the styles. And, of course, Floralia is spectacular! I'm glad to hear that you will write another Heather story. I'm actually sad for her, and sad that Sam didn't remember that SHE broke the connection for his own good. Will she find the demon and help Sam? How far in the future will you go? I can't wait to find out!
Congrats on another great story!
| Singer Salvage chapter 14 . 8/7/2008
That was great! I loved it, awesome work X3
| cindy123 chapter 14 . 8/7/2008
Wonderful ending! Can't wait to see what Heather does the next time around. I'll be watching for her.
| kokoda2007 chapter 14 . 8/7/2008
Loved it! And I'm excited to hear that a third instalment is being planned.
Oh, and thanks for the brotherly hugging :)