|Reviews for While You Were Sleeping|
| Jen-2b chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
thank you so much for this little story - I really enjoyed reading it.
To be honest: first I was a little irritated that you went back in time and while reading I thought to myself, that I probably would have done it the other way. But than I read the last oneshot and suddenly it all made perfect sense - that was really interessting and made the story very special for me.
So - keep up the great work.
| jesusfreak100percent chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
It looks like you're going backwards - I mean, as if the story was written backwards, like, before and after. It's pretty cool, the way you did it. :)
| Enkidu07 chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
that was beautiful. I loved the look back into their life. I am loving the teen!Winchesters lately. I work with troubled adolescents and see a lot of the winchesters in them. trying so hard to be grown up. dealing with too much stuff for a kid. precious in their innocence/awareness. ahh... i am rambling... thanks for sharing!
| amyblair chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
Totally loved it.
So enjoyed how we started out with the boys being teenagers and then descended in years until we ended where it all began. How sharp of you.
Loved your description of the witch. I will admit, though, I thought Sam was going to be cursed and the only thing that was going to break it was true love's kiss...
I liked when Sam thought Dean was dead and then said, "your breath smells like you're dead."
My two favorite lines, though, were the "tailored-suit-wearing dick" (Awesome) and mollycoddle. I've never heard that before. Is is a British term?
Nice, nice shorts.
| Trish62 chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
I went back to read this after reading A lesson for beginners, and I know I read the first bit, but I must have been interrupted and never read the rest. Anyway, it was really nicely done. I really enjoy reading small bits and pieces of everyday life, especially when they are well written. Nice job!
| Rat chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
awesome story, i love how you moved them back in time to that day. Great writing.
| Phx chapter 1 . 7/25/2008
Not sure how I missed these but a very enjoyable series of scenes. Thank you for not painting John as a total A-hole because the man Kripke has shown us, while flawed, did love his boys and he couldn't have been cold all the time or else Sam and Dean would have never turned out as well as they did.
And I am so glad to see youa re fleshing some of these out as I enjoyed the witch story and am looking forward to reading the poison ivy story :)
| ROBINV chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
These little snippets of "sleeptime" were just wonderful! I enjoyed each and every one of them! Love, Robin
| friendly chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
nice job.. those were reallygood..I would love to see more of the story with the first one... I would love to see how the witch got sam..
| supernaturalsammy67 chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
how are you!
OMG if this story is anything to judge, then your incredably amazing and bloody brilliant!
OMG HUN, this is just awesome
thanks so much, how do you write so amazingly...your description alone just gave me goosebumps...wow hun
loved it x
| Ms Hobgoblin chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
Great little snippits of the lives of the brothers.
Very well written and enjoyed.
| Twinchy chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
Those were great little ficlets and I was especially fond of your telling them in reversed order.
Daddy Winchester cooking for his sons is always a treat. LOL
As is 9-year-old Dean spoiling his little brother by allowing him to sleep in his bed (after the 'monster' attack).
And the final scene with the whole family in better times was so sweet and heart-breaking.
| kokoda2007 chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
Wow, I loved how 'different' this was. The last bit, with John falling asleep, should have felt soft and fluffy, but knowing what was to come, aagh! How you wrote the whole reverse chronology thing ending at that spot was just perfect.
Dare I ask for a quick one shot featuring Sam and poison ivy? That section drew such a clear mental image for me :)
Thanks for writing another wonderful story for all of us to enjoy.
| cavetrollgrl chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
well done. I especially loved how you went from older to younger and went from Winchester angst to Winchester fluff and happy times. Poison ivy and a cast poor Sam. nicely done showing how cute and sweet the Winchester family was even on the worst night of their life
| Adara-chan67 chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
Aw...that was so good! I loved every single one. My favorite was the first, but the cutest was the second-to-last. The sweater-monster...so adorable.
It was such a great group of shorts, to sum it up. Thanks!