Reviews for The Jinx
annea101 chapter 1 . 3/28/2014
breaking the 4th wall a bit aint ya?
Iluvshep chapter 1 . 4/10/2011
I like this. I guess poor John would be ok if all us Shep whump addicts didn't like him to be in pain so much. Poor he sounds a little paranoid...

good job on the story :)
SgtGroganSG chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
yes we fanfic writers are very evil *evil grin*

Oh I loive this story!
Holly-Batali chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
I love it! Yes, we're to blame, but dontcha love it? Shep whump is too fun.
Whirlwind421 chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
Fanfic writers! I love it! It's awesome and hilarious!
sakurablue13 chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
make sense. well, what can we say? we just love Shep whumping

candie91 chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
very good story... ive never read a story with fanfiction writers written into the story, very well done
Ianthe-Echo chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
Very true.
Alaina Ross chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
That is SO great! I love the way you actually incoporate your auidience in the fic! That is a trait of a really great writer! Can't wait for more!
godsdaughter77 chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
I thought that was a fun fanfic and I'm glad you shared! Yeah, we all are pretty mean to Sheppard aren't we?
Lt Laura Cadman chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
Great story ! It was hilarious.

But in Fanfic, I think that Rodney are more often in trouble than Sheppard.

Good job !
jasminesmommy chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
lol that was cute and mean at the same time :)
sparklyshimmer2010 chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
lol that is great! what a cute little fic :) we can be pretty mean to them cant we? ;)
Amethyst Princess 27 chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
Poor Sheppard.. You are right, but then again it puts some reality in the Atlantis series. Besides its alot more dramatic than watching an hour of Rodney suffering from a paper cut... LOL! The story was a nice one shot but I wouldn't mind seeing another chapter.

Nice job,

Anonymous Sister of the Author chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
ohmygod! this is hilarious! love it! *love*