|Reviews for Who am I to say?|
| Amanda chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
| AllytheThird chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
Never say ur not good at something. That was AWESOME:)
| Eighthnote chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
Sweet. Max was in character. She's stubborn but she knows when to listen to reason - eventually :) Spelling and grammar are pretty good. Few places you left out words, though reading back the only one I can find is 'providing (for) and protecting the flock'
Maybe the line 'But Max was fighting the most stubborn fighter she had ever faced: herself.' could be was battling the most stubborn? It just seemed repetitive to fight a fighter. Maybe it's just me.
And the meeting was just right. Both of them are tough. I liked Max's line about flood control - it's so her.
I really liked it. Keep writing - You do a good job.
| kiki1592 chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
Awe, that was really sweet.
| laddiegirl chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
not bad. a little lacking, but still a good story.