|Reviews for If Every Word I Said Could Make You Laugh|
| breathelifein chapter 30 . 12/6/2020
Ok, sorry, but they wanna wait until marriage to have sex? I don't mind this being T rated, I don't need to really read that, but this fact put me off this story IMMENSELY. It was going so well, but nah. This ain't it for me.
| breathelifein chapter 16 . 12/5/2020
I absolutely adore Damien Rice, so I legit crying for that whole part of this chapter. Ugh.
| Shandablonde chapter 21 . 11/4/2020
I wish I was that mature about relationships when I was younger.
| Shandablonde chapter 19 . 11/4/2020
I really wanted Bella to make things harder for Edward since he was being such a jerk and then you had to be such a good writer that I forgave him. Lol, I’m feeling this fan fic too personally you did a great job reeling the story line together. I’m also impressed with the length that you kept them apart. As a reader it was enough to be upset for the length that it kept the story interesting to a mild euphoria that my fave characters are getting together in a very natural way. And your version of Emmett is freaking hilarious.
| bethabetha chapter 31 . 10/1/2020
if carlisle is being sued for malpractice, the family would be fine. that’s exactly what malpractice insurance is for.
| bethabetha chapter 13 . 9/29/2020
kind of driving me a little nuts that you have bella’s birthday on the wrong date. she’s september 13, not 19.
| bethabetha chapter 10 . 9/29/2020
i have to agree with bella... she’s definitely overreacting. dear lord, girl, have a little self-respect.
| bethabetha chapter 9 . 9/29/2020
i’d be interested to know what edward said to tyler... and if it was to warn him away from bella, who the hell does he think he is? he’s got tanya, so why is he keeping guys away from bella? i’m not liking him, mostly because i feel like he’s sending some mixed signals to bella.
| bethabetha chapter 4 . 9/28/2020
i’m really enjoying the plot of this fic, but the author really could have used a beta. the number of spelling errors is kind of taking me out of the story, which sucks because i like it. hoping they get better as it goes on because they’re pretty distracting
| MissWM chapter 42 . 8/19/2020
I truly enjoyed it. it was so funny and cute.
I have to say, though, that the plot was borderline too naive heehe don't get me wrong, i liked it all way too much. you are an amazing writer. it is just that sometimes their struggles and perceptions and reactions to totally normal situations did not feel like the reactions adults (ok, *young* adults) would have to those kind of situations, u know? like the whole initial ordeal about cussin day; or even the fact the cullens would have issues because carlisle was being sued. i mean, come on, that's not how it works. and bella and edward got on my nerves a lot, specially at the beginning.
i had an amazing time, even so! laughed soooo much. emmet's antics were awesome. and the group relationship was so so cute.
thank you for sharing!
| rogue0ne chapter 46 . 6/12/2020
I don't know how to begin this, considering how long this fanfic has existed, but from the bottom of my heart, I need to make this grateful review. Buckle yourself, because this will probably be very cheesy.
I've just finished binge-reading this, and I truly cannot express enough how much this fanfic means to me now. There's nothing I love more than an amazing and fulfilling found family story, and this one got my heart soaring all the way through! It's such a beautiful, easy-going, and happy read; everything seems to fall right into place and I found myself laughing out loud in so many parts. The characters are so alive and solid, all of their relationships are so true, and this not even mentioning how amazingly good Edward and Bella's romance was! All the hurt/comfort and initial longing and angst are so worth it.
Now I'm here lingering on everything these characters shared as if they were my own memories. So I want to thank you, dear author, for everything about it. It has made me feel more than even the original Twilight books did; so leaving this here, even if I feel like I'm very late on finding this gem, is the least I felt like I could do.
| WellHelloThereEdward chapter 14 . 6/1/2020
I know I’m late to the party with this one, but what an amazing story. This chapter has me in tears. The whole unrequited love thing, we all know how that feels, right? I so feel for Bella right now. Thanks for sharing this story with us xx
| Moonprincess92 chapter 46 . 5/25/2020
So when I was 16 years old, I was obsessed with Twilight and this fic was a HUGE part of my life. It was probably my favourite Twilight fanfic ever. I stayed up binging the first 20 or so chapters until like 1am and I absolutely lived for updates. I remember hating Tanya and laughing at all the inside jokes, screaming when Edward and Bella finally kissed and wishing that I had a close group of friends like this fic. This fic made me get into Jimmy Eat World and I still love them to this day. I am 28 now, and with Midnight Sun being announced I started feeling all nostalgic and was like 'bruh u need to go and tell the IEWIS girl how much you loved her story' because I really, really did.
I actually went searching for the comment I left on this last chapter and apparently a part of it was this:
"Overall, i'm going to mis IEWIS-Land so much. Which is why i'm super glad there'll be a sequal. I love love loved it, and i'm prooud to be a member of the MHA.
I still love it, your writing's still awesome, you still rock, and you should be insanely proud of this story."
My words back then still stand true today. Honestly, I just wanted to take the time to thank you for being such a huge part of my childhood. I don't even know if you check this account or whether you'll ever see this comment, but I hope you do bc this fic meant so much to me and it always will. Thank you so much, and I hope that wherever in the world you may be, you are happy, safe and well. xoxo
| Guest chapter 27 . 11/5/2019
Something tells me I might be a bit older than you, because I remember when Escape (the Pina Colada song) came out. It’s by Rupert Holmes, not Jimmy Buffett. Great story, though.
| vampirelady13 chapter 18 . 7/2/2019
Still think Bella is an idiot I would never let someone treat me like has Bella that is dumb.