Reviews for The Fire
RoseGirl101 chapter 5 . 7/11/2016
PLZ update
Aussieshipwhore chapter 5 . 4/4/2009
OMFG I love it!

Please update asap!
Otakugal chapter 5 . 12/30/2008
makahias chapter 4 . 9/3/2008
hope u update soon
Golden Vampire Eyes chapter 5 . 8/5/2008
It's alright. :D
bubbling joy chapter 4 . 7/30/2008
I cant wait until chapter five!please have this be a bxe story and maybe a lxj
LenaCullen chapter 4 . 7/22/2008
Very, good, interesting twist with Jasper leaving Alice. Leslie is an intriguing character, maybe you could develop her a little more?

You could do with checking your punctuation too, the sentences go a bit long without a break. I f someone was reading it out load, they would break the pace of the sentence with possibly taking a breath too early, or too late. (My other profession would have been an english teacher, sorry!)

Other than those two little things, an intriguing story! Looking forward to chapter 5!

genisis love chapter 4 . 7/16/2008
YAY Jasper's back! I love it!

Love Pixie
genisis love chapter 3 . 7/16/2008
They are gonna get along great!

Love Pixie
genisis love chapter 2 . 7/16/2008
Yay she has a little sister!

Love Pixie
genisis love chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
Oh yay! Bella is gonna find them!

Love Pixie
fairytaleromance chapter 4 . 7/14/2008
wah! alice n jasper divorced? well send him to me i'll shag him! lol...aww hurry up and update again! plz! is edward gonna come too? i hope he gets his ass kicked! he left her AGAIN! first in new moon n now! my size 10 will go up his ass n around the corner so far its gonna take 8 doctors and 15 hours to remove it...lmao
Jade's Roses chapter 4 . 7/13/2008
oohh,you could almost call that a cliffy! I love it though! except the part about alice and jasper divorced. I want to cry!
Maximum-Twilight-Ride chapter 4 . 7/13/2008
Poor Jazzy! I still love him though!
Golden Vampire Eyes chapter 4 . 7/13/2008
OH MY CARLISLE! I love your story! I can't believe they divorced! It is crazy!(Good way crazy)! Are Jasper and Bella falling in love? I hope not. I am just not a real fan of Belspar. UPDATE SOON!
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