Reviews for Psychomachia, The Battle of Souls
neongreenninja chapter 7 . 9/20/2008
this was hott on so many levels!

loved it loved it LOVED IT!
jacklynvt11 chapter 7 . 9/13/2008
Beautiful stories. Loved them all. Well written. :)
shelubbsu chapter 7 . 9/13/2008
I LOVE I LOVE I LOVE I LOVE

i hope that is not a sin :P

such an original idea! and i love your style of writing as well!

definitly getting a position on my favs :D

xx.
Ida chapter 7 . 9/12/2008
I really enjoyed reading these, they are so well written and I hope to read more from you!

The way you describe things from their perspectives is so good and you really catch the escence of bones and booth :D
kellz1pt5 chapter 7 . 9/11/2008
all i have to say is...damn. What an excellent piece of work you've written! I love it! It's one of my favorites!
Unleashed Gummy Sweets chapter 7 . 9/11/2008
Perfect! I loved the way he didn't confess his his love for her like in all the other stories and how he respected her, Fab-u-lus!
TheLifeILive chapter 7 . 9/11/2008
Terrific ending! Couldn't have been better:)

I was in suspense as to what you'd do for lust. So many perfect scenarios. I loved the one you chose.

I loved the whole make up scene; making it clear that it wasn't just her beauty, her body that he lusted after and that it was her true beauty that he felt had no need of being enhanced by make up that he loved. And at the end, when most girls get made up for the men they're with, she takes her make up off for him. Very sweet.

I loved the beginning, how she was sitting there missing Booth, wishing he had come to see her.

Again, great ending. I've had a terrific time reading this story:) Thank you.

Leah
celtic33 chapter 7 . 9/11/2008
I liked them! good work
18lzytwner chapter 7 . 9/11/2008
Oh now there we go. Breakfast and a little side of bow chicka wah wah. ;D Excellent story. :)
Aching Bones chapter 7 . 9/10/2008
Hi there,

Aw! This was so sweet...

She would not normally expect him on a Sunday but was not surprised when he called to her door...

Love how he watched her putting on her makeup and how he was aroused by the whole thing...But he preferred her without makeup...she was so beautiful without it...

Their kiss was just so sweet...

'Good things come to those who wait' eh!

I would love to be a fly on the wall when they get back to her apartment after breakfast...

Thank you for these lovely chapters...

Ger
Unleashed Gummy Sweets chapter 6 . 9/5/2008
Thank you, it was great!
18lzytwner chapter 6 . 9/5/2008
Oh this was good. Show some of Booth's weaknesses and then let Bones kiss him! Love it!
TheLifeILive chapter 6 . 9/4/2008
Hey,

Awesome job with this one!

I loved the whole gambling idea, perfect for greed.

I adored their conversation at the end about how if you love something you have to let it go and how that led to Booth admitting that that was how he felt when he told Brennan to go with Sully. Awesome idea!

Parker was adorable; great job writing him.

I really felt for Brennan when she realized that she'd hurt Booth. She tries so hard.

LOL, can't wait for lust. I've been looking forward to it since the beginning of the story:P

Leah
jennerallysweeter chapter 6 . 9/3/2008
i loved how you intertwined booth's gambling and brennan [ALMOST!] sailing with sully into the sunset with greed.

it really worked...

and parker!

gah!

i will never get tired of that adorable little boy.

he really should be on the show more often.

and i can't wait for the next one.

i've been waiting for it this entire fic.

;]

bones starts in less than 4 hours!

yay!

-jenn
Aching Bones chapter 6 . 9/3/2008
Hi there,

I liked this one...Like when Bones and Booth get together at the diner but like it even more when Parker is involved...Love how he wants to be a scientist like Bones...Had to feel sorry for poor Booth...he was feeling a little left out...But he was ok in the end...

It was nice how Booth taught Parker the lesson on 'greed'...Booth is so sad about his past as a gambler...but Bones was having none of it...He is the man he is today because of the lessons he learned from his past...

Loved their sweet kiss...

Looking forward to 'lust'...

Ger
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