|Reviews for Make It Count|
| Ginevra Annabeth Herondale chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
Nice. Short. To the point. Yet descriptive.
| Lucechange chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
This is a beautiful story and I loved the writing style, gorgeous
| Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
Beautiful amazing epic.
Wow I love stories that chart the whole damn seven years lol!
And I loved the pace and feeling and the ending of this. And the unusual person/tense. I think I am trying to write something using that and it just keeps getting confused lol. So I really find it impressive
| writergal24 chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
That was beautiful. Really. I loved the format, even if you said in the AN that you had borrowed it. I thought it worked perfectly for the story and for your style. Awesome, awesome, awesome job!
| papercranesandplanes chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
"In short, just let him love you with the heart he's been saving you for all along." That was so,SO cute! Lovely story...
Funny thing is - I'm not romantic, but when it comes to my OTP, things like this make me all...I don't know. I want to squeal or jump from happiness or something like that. You just did that to me with this ending. Really beautiful story. :)
| thewitchisdead chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
wow you had my heart racing all along, specially in the end. The writing style is beautiful and it worked amazingly in this story. I think you told james and lily's story beautifully
| CowboySteel chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
Oh my dear lord, that was heartwrenchingly beautiful. I am overwhelmed. Wow. Excellent job xxx
| BalloonsInTheSky chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
Wow. Just wow. Beautiful story. You're really an amazing author. I can't believe you could write something incredible like this (and your other stories) at that age! I mean,you can only get better with time and you're already brilliant,so.. Keep it up!
| fanta-faerie chapter 1 . 1/11/2012
That was amazing.
I think that was one of the absolute best stories I have ever had the pleasure of reading- you did an AMAZING job. I love your writing style!
Keep it up! :)
| FlubberyFlobberworms chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
this story is brill! very nice! I like the way you wrote it, different and a great change!
| kaate51 chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
Um, wow. I loved it. The style was suprising but effective. It cut out most of the in between stuff but still managed to build up a relationship between them. It was wonderful, thank you :)
| quill.is.mightier chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
A very emotional story, for which the style was effective. Good job.
| anonymous chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
Yeah, I thought this was quite good. I quite like 2nd person narration, and I liked yours better than I like anything I've read of Pantz, because I think you're a better writer, and as he used it so often, it became very mechanical, whereas your is very fresh. However, I do think that sometimes the flow of sentences is a bit off because of the 2nd person narration, and is something that I think could be improved.
Interestingly, you've said in the summary that the rating is T just to be safe, but I recommend you up it to mature. It's just that one sentence "Let him push into you", but any talk of penetration should most definitely be mature.
| When you notice the Stripes chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
I was listening to the perfect song when I read this, so it was doubly good! fantasic as always!
| CanisMajor13 chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
This made me sad and I have no idea why. It is wonderful and I love it but it made me sad.