Reviews for Make It Count
Ginevra Annabeth Herondale chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
Nice. Short. To the point. Yet descriptive.
:D
Lucechange chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
This is a beautiful story and I loved the writing style, gorgeous
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
Beautiful amazing epic.
Wow I love stories that chart the whole damn seven years lol!
And I loved the pace and feeling and the ending of this. And the unusual person/tense. I think I am trying to write something using that and it just keeps getting confused lol. So I really find it impressive
writergal24 chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
That was beautiful. Really. I loved the format, even if you said in the AN that you had borrowed it. I thought it worked perfectly for the story and for your style. Awesome, awesome, awesome job!
writergal24
papercranesandplanes chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
"In short, just let him love you with the heart he's been saving you for all along." That was so,SO cute! Lovely story...
Funny thing is - I'm not romantic, but when it comes to my OTP, things like this make me all...I don't know. I want to squeal or jump from happiness or something like that. You just did that to me with this ending. Really beautiful story. :)
thewitchisdead chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
wow you had my heart racing all along, specially in the end. The writing style is beautiful and it worked amazingly in this story. I think you told james and lily's story beautifully
CowboySteel chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
Oh my dear lord, that was heartwrenchingly beautiful. I am overwhelmed. Wow. Excellent job xxx
BalloonsInTheSky chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
Wow. Just wow. Beautiful story. You're really an amazing author. I can't believe you could write something incredible like this (and your other stories) at that age! I mean,you can only get better with time and you're already brilliant,so.. Keep it up!
fanta-faerie chapter 1 . 1/11/2012
Holy shit.

That was amazing.

I think that was one of the absolute best stories I have ever had the pleasure of reading- you did an AMAZING job. I love your writing style!

Keep it up! :)
FlubberyFlobberworms chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
this story is brill! very nice! I like the way you wrote it, different and a great change!
kaate51 chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
Um, wow. I loved it. The style was suprising but effective. It cut out most of the in between stuff but still managed to build up a relationship between them. It was wonderful, thank you :)
quill.is.mightier chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
A very emotional story, for which the style was effective. Good job.
anonymous chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
Yeah, I thought this was quite good. I quite like 2nd person narration, and I liked yours better than I like anything I've read of Pantz, because I think you're a better writer, and as he used it so often, it became very mechanical, whereas your is very fresh. However, I do think that sometimes the flow of sentences is a bit off because of the 2nd person narration, and is something that I think could be improved.

Interestingly, you've said in the summary that the rating is T just to be safe, but I recommend you up it to mature. It's just that one sentence "Let him push into you", but any talk of penetration should most definitely be mature.
When you notice the Stripes chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
I was listening to the perfect song when I read this, so it was doubly good! fantasic as always!
CanisMajor13 chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
This made me sad and I have no idea why. It is wonderful and I love it but it made me sad.
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