Reviews for The Ronshine Incident
Taechunsa chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
LOL! That was great. I especially love Mr. Dr. P's reaction.

Keep up the good work.
Blooddraken chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
Just so you know, you are very weird. I like that in an author. Keep up the good work.
Romance and Musicals chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
he he! cute!
Sentinel103 chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
Phoenix, Spectre should be proud of you. Our favorite male lead is spreading his Ronshine out to Kim, he'd better not get ideas about sharing it though, who knows what pandamonium could occur.

Thanks,

Larry (Sentinel 103)
Darkide chapter 1 . 7/11/2008
Oh geeze, you did not just write that. As soon as I read the line about the action news reporter on the scene at the supermarket I knew exactly what you were doing, lol.

So I got online and played the song while I read this and I just couldn't stop laughing, lol! That was amazing, well done.

Yeah, I did.
spectre666 chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
Very nice adaaptation of a Steven's classic. Although I agree with KP, ron had better hide his "shine" for a while around Mr. P. (G) thanks

Spectre
Captain IT chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
Oh yes they call it Ronshine,

His grin is bigger than my behind

Keep it KP real

Captain IT
whitem chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
Now I liked that... I really liked that.

Random acts of Ronshine. Makes a day so much better... For Kim.

I just hope Ron stays away from Mr Dr P for a bit...
Kwebs chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
LOL Phoenix, that was brilliant. The last line was great! Booyah indeed.
daccu65 chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
Hey there:

I'm showing my age, but I recognized the song before I got to the bottom. I'm going to show more of my age, I used to have this on 45. Anyway, I liked the adaptation.

daccu65
Michael Howard chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
Okay, so it's fluffy. But it's GOOD fluff. And the closing line is great!
Comet Moon chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
Chuckle
Samurai Crunchbird chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
SP,

'Say it isn't so, Rufus!'

I really enjoyed this light little piece. However, if this really IS a 'one-shot', please do the courteous thing and mark it as 'Complete'.

And now...my own take on the whole sitch...

Kissing Kim...

Look at that. Look at that.

...Every chance...

Look at that. Look at that.

...Even when he's losing his pants!

Oh, yes. They call him 'The Ron'...

WHE

Look at that. Look at that.

...Trying to get his 'Ronshine' on...

Look at that. Look at that.

He's just as proud as he can be...of dating 'His KP'

While others call him a freak.

(laughter ensues)

Oh, Yes. They call him 'The Ron'...

WHE

Look at that. Look at that.

Bonnie wishes he were gone.

Look at that. Look at that.

He just really loves to kiss...his own red-headed miss.

Guess you could call him unique.

WHE

I thought you would like that little tribute to the song...and your work. And to think I did that in the span of ten minutes. I guess I am ready for starting 'KParody' after all...after my current buffer is through with its run.

Your friend in writing,

The Samurai Crunchbird
CajunBear73 chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
Well played guy, well played. Good parody of Ray's parody from years ago.

Loved the parent's different reactions to Kim getting Ronshined, especially the hazards of getting it next to the heavy thrusters. Oy why is it always the heavy thrusters? Especially with the guidance system...

But I'm glad to see Kim agreed with Ron that he scored at least 6 times that night... A-Booyah!

CB73

Thanks for the shoutout my friend. Always glad to lend a hand to the brethren.