Thank you for the wonderful chapter...

I miss the scene where Kaname whack some sense into Sousuke... :D

It's getting more and more interesting...

I wonder who'll fail the next test...

Please update soon...

Their training is so much fun... for me! It sounds hellish, yet believable. Good work! I love the way the characters have tried to stick together and the nuanced way you have them dropping out. It's unpredictable and enjoyable.

Yeah!

This chapter completely made my day, which until I read this had pretty much sucked. It was just so much fun! I love Auntie- she is my hero. Maybe I'm a little twisted, but I really enjoyed seeing what mind games she would come up with next and who would get the boot. It was like a military version of Survivor, but much more interesting. Very well done!

Thanks for the update! Loved it!

So is Bear the spy? Ops, maybe I'm jumping the gun here. Very much enjoying this story.

Just finishing chapter 8...

This story is great...

Please update... :)

I'm definitely a big fan of yours! You caught me with this story.

Ah man your story is so catching! You're a pro in catching the attention of your readers. And I must say this story is just what my Full Metal Panic! Thirst needed. It's greatly written, amazing new twists and detailed point of views on the characters.

I must say that Bear is quite the character just what you would expect from a man in his 40 that has seen action. Out of the ones you made he is mt fave...

I can't wait to read more. I'm so curious how Kaname will be handling the place...

Thanks for the great read and Cheers!

Ohh... there were so many new characters in this one! Auntie is going to have a field day. As for the ones I like the best, they would have to be, in order of preference: Bear, Cricket, Del and the Greek. I really like Bear- he's got that wolf in an old man's clothing (if that makes any sense?) essence. As of now, he's been mostly a negotiator, but I think he has some hidden, probably ruthless, potential. Cricket... well, he's enigma, which in and of itself is a good reason to keep him around. Del because she's tough and well, she's the only other girl. And the Greek, well that's because I think Del would be so much more fun with a punching bag. Nothing makes a better punching bag than a perv.

Anyway, you did a good job handling all those OC's. The way they interacted was realistic. I enjoyed watching the beginnings of cliques form because that's true to life- if you throw a bunch of random people together, they find those most compatible & stick with them, or extract themselves altogether.

Quite enjoying this. I've always liked the idea (and hoped someone would write about it). That is, the idea Chidori joins Mithril and the tables are turned - now Sousuke is the 'normal' one and Kaname is the one who's really outta place. P

But I'd like to see where you go with this.

Keep it up.

~Jarik

Ah I love reading this story . And I was so excited to see that you updated so soon again! I expected to wait a few weeks for it.

I liked this chapter but I feel really bad for kaname. that must suck staying with all guys and being the only one whos not a soldier. poor girl.

post the next one ASAP! :]

Yay! I did a happy dance when I saw the alert in my inbox this morning! I'm really enjoying this fic, and you have a really good feel for the main characters. I love the OC's in this one too, they blend into the story seamlessly...and you leave me wondering just HOW does Cricket know all this stuff about Kaname? I have to say, so far he's my fave of your OC's...he kinda reminds me of Shingi! Can't wait to see why poor Sousuke only got three hours...was it a "fun" dream of Kaname? Or perhaps one of Auntie's tests...my mind is spinning with the possibilities!

great chapter!

At last, another quality FMP fic that isn't juvenile humour thrown in with sub-par "action" and actually weaves an intriguing story. Fairly decent punctuation and grammar to boot. Will definitely be keeping an eye out for updates.

plz continue soon, its getting great!