This has to be the best Full Metal Panic fic out there. It's incredible. The writing is awesome, the characters are great. Simply awesome!

There are not enough words in the English language to describe how happy finding this awesome story made me. Your talent as a writer is phenomenal, it's hard to believe I found something this well written on fanfiction of all places. If you ever get a novel published, tell me where to get it, because I will be the first in line. Your characterization of everyone and the progression of their relationships is spot on and exactly the way one might imagine them. The Kaname/Sousuke shipper in me feels there wasn't enough focus given to it, but that's just my personal bias, because otherwise I have no complaints.

OMG.
So much love.
This was a great read. I'm actually kind of distraught that I mainlined it and read it all in a day. What am I going to do now? I even like your original characters.

1. This is amazing writing. You've got a few words missing from time to time, and in the earlier chapters, there were a few spots where the verb tense switched around, but it's not enough to make me even THINK about not reading this story.
2. This is an amazing story with spot-on characterization. I can imagine this happening and everyone's decisions seem very natural.
3. Is Kurz's AI named Betty in reference to the Paul Simon song?

The things you think about when reading fanfiction... :)

This is an excellent fic. The storyline is great and the characters are interesting. this is the kind of fic that keeps me coming back to this site.

FANTASTIC! I couldn't stop reading.
FMP! fandom really needs more stories like this. Thank you!

Good stuff. Could use a little polishing in places, but enjoyable overall.

So far, a solid piece of work that captures the spirit of the series well, but you could really use some better proofreading. The text is littered with typos and malapropisms that a decent editor should have caught (clamored instead of clambered, for example).

I love this story! You got the fmp cast realy well, and your ocs are awesome!

I literally spent my whole day reading your story! It is beyond amazing! I really hope to read a next chapter soon!

Please update soon hun

xx

This is brilliant! YOU are brilliant!

(And I'm screwed, as I was supposed to clean up my flat but kept on reading and reading instead. Your fault, really.)

This is by far one of the BEST FMP story I've read; Sousuke, Kaname, Mao etc all remained in character, and I loved the original ones. Espeacilly Bear, I just wanna hug him or something! The story has a great plot, and I loved that you managed to get it beyond the manga's AmalgamXMithrill. I'm curious, I definetly want more, and I want to hug you just as much as I want to hug Bear.

Plus, the panties Leonardo sent Kaname were genius!

I could go on and on, but I'll stop now.

CONGRATULATIONS!,
cheers!,
Cla.

Loved this story,really you did an amazing job on up the great writing.

Perfect. Just perfect.

It was awesome!

I had an amazing time reading this fic! Great work! Keep it up.