I really loved the developments in this chapter. I have always thought that Kaname would eventually join Mithril. Maybe it's just my girlish wish to have a situation where Sousuke & Kaname would be able to be together permanently, but I honestly think it makes perfect sense. I am very excited to see where this is going next!

And I'm really glad you didn't kill off Wraith- he (or she?) is one of my favorite characters.

Is there a little tension in the air perhaps... What happens next should be interesting.

What is going on with sousuke though? He seems out of character. Hopefully that will be explained next chapter.

This is neat. I hope to see more of this. I really want to see where they go in their lives after this. I wonder what kaname will decide. Go to college or follow Sousuke. I am sure her knowlege can be used somehow.

One thing I have always wanted to see is a second submarine. Captain Chidori anyone?

There are two major oceans after all.

this was so good. i was wating for this chapter to be up and now it is! great story tension, loved the whole "revenge killer plot". keep up the good work. can't wait for chapter 4!

This was a great chapter! The chase scene was so intense, yet humorous too (Sousuke got a eye full!). You've got the chemistry perfect between all the characters, which is quite a feat in and of itself. Very nicely done!

OMG this is one of the best stories i have ever read. thanx so much for updating please continue to write more. your one of the few authors who keep the characters in character from the the ! my heart became heavy while reading this story i flt so bad for kaname. your a great writer and please update. your on my favorite authors list. ja ne

I don't have a whole lot to say this time, but it was a good chapter. It was nice to see Sousuke & Kaname (I always love his "gifts") and you did a great job setting up a new threat. I'm very happy to see this update.

this was amazing please continue this story i love it. you really grasped the characteristics of the charaters from the show. great job. can't wait to read more. your an amazing writer.

Good prologue! It'll be interesting to see exactly what the changes are that you hinted at. As for this chapter, I think you did an excellent job with Melissa & Kurz. They were very in character, the chemistry was great and the situation was actually plausible.

One thing though- "couldnyt" should be "couldn't"

Anyway, nicely done. It was a very satisfying Kurz/Mao scene.

Good to see a Kurz/Mao fic in the FMP section. Good work, hope to see more soon.