Before I give an honest assessment in detail, let me reveal to you my experience. I have been involved in writing since I was sixteen. I have been involved with this site that is both writing and reviewing fanfiction for over a decade. In that time, I have seen a variable of different styles and promising authors from all about of varying backgrounds, degrees and ages. I can say today that I have encountered yet another one of those shooting star authors as I read this magnificent piece of work. I have said this about several fanfics thus far and I do not regret saying it again that this was one of the best damn fanfics on FMP I have read in quite some time. You have truly captured all of the main genre characters in their true light. Nothing at all seemed OOC to me considering the circumstances, interaction remained on target and all other critical areas constantly received top level attention. And your beta readers are a credit to your work. All of their dedicated hard work could be clearly seen as each chapter was polished to perfection. I could not tear away from this masterful fanfic and read the entire thing in 1 and 1/2 days flat. Believe me, your 7 month investment was not wasted on this. My final verdict for this fanfiction: Five Stars for Perfect Penmanship Execution - No Contest. If anyone agrees not with my decision, I seriously think they should be checked into a psychiatric ward. That is all. Laserai Out.

Very well written. I enjoyed it thoroughly!

Please make a sequel. If I had money I would pay you to write a sequel to this story.

Great history. You did a very good job

Till next

Great story!

Keep on writing!

this is the 4th fanfic based on full metal panic that i read and it is good. i liked the way that auntie fucked with the recruits, it reminded me of ender's shadow by orson scott card. mellisa and mao got some development finally. and i'm beyond shocked happy that tessa found another guy other than souske.

the only thing that bothers me is that during the later part of the story we dont get to see much of souske and kaname and their relationship. and when we do, its all too simple - kiss, explain, punish, kiss.

for what its worth, i'll say that this is better than "dazed and confused" but worse than "christmas cake".

all in all, i enjoyed reading this fic and i dont regret the time spent.

Well.. I'm actually a big fan of FMP anime and I watched season 1 to fumoffu to 2nd raid.. and I'm actually looking forward for the next season until I realized as i search in the internet that there might be no 4th season. So now I resort to fanfiction...

And i daresay this fanfic served me well. The tone of the story really captured what could happened post TSR. I really loved how you developed the relationships of everyone as the story progressed. I can't help but mention that my favorite scene is when Kaname in her "whispered trance" said in front of the High command that she "exploit personal attachment" of Sousuke to achieve imprint and activate the lambda driver. And when sousuke was asked if he has feelings for her he cant just say no. hahaha. That was fun. XD

I plan to see all fanfics about fmp here in but I'm so lucky to sstumble upon this. I'm really glad! I like the story over all. Even though i'm not really a fan of mao/weber (i read this for kanamae/sousuke) XD But i still love what you did to their relationship. Refreshing story! I'm looking forward seeing more fics like this :D

My review: Go to the illustrators with ownership of the plot and have it made. No more, no less.
Seven months?
Jeez!

LOVED IT. Loved every second of it. Stunning. I loved all the original characters, they're so well crafted and I really cared for Aristo at the end (and especially Del!). Perfect characterizations of the canon crew, and overall a great story. I really love that Kaname accepted that she's not normal and she can't have a normal life, it's one of my pet peeves with her in the series, but she's only 16/17 so it's to be expected that she as an immature outlook on life.

Sorry for gushing like a fool, but I couldn't help myself. This fic is just so well done.

One tiny thing: there were a few spelling mistakes, where you had the wrong word for what you wanted (homonyms). I don't know if you want to go back and fix them since this fic is complete, and they didn't take away from it at all. Just thought I'd let you know. 3

best fic i've read in a very long time
you have incredible writing talent

thankyou for letting me read this, it was an honor to have such a fine piece of lit.

Mina_

Oh, I love, love, LOVE this story. I only stumbled upon your fics by accident while searching to give me a Mao/Kurtz fix. But now I feel ever so lucky I did. Thanks for the ride!

great story couldn't take my eye's away from it. a sequal would be good

Awesome story! I was kind of hoping for a sequel, but I reckon that the story ended on a good note anyway :D

I love how you captured Sousuke's personality...and Kaname's...And Mao's...And Weber's...

Ah, in conclusion, I LOVED YOUR STORY! It was perfect! Love it!

wow, that was a rather quick decision on Kaname's part.

It's too bad that Wraith was taken out of business, if you will.

Looks like Kaname's stuck going to a school she never thought to attend in the first place.

Don't you need certain military credentials for it?

Oh well, it will be interesting.

What rank would she be given, I wonder?

Okay, that's it for tonight.

Until your next chapter,

-P.P.V.V.

The Mao/Weber pairing is just great. I like the way you write it. This is the first FMP fanfiction I've read, so I am really happy that you've done a great job at it.

You've captured their personalities so well.

oh, before I forget: isn't WRAITH a girl?

Or did I just miss something in the show?

I guess I'll have to re-watch it...

Okay, onto the next chapter,

-P.P.V.V.