Reviews for Afterglow
embrace-your-inner-dork chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
I was very surprised that this didn't have any reviews yet. That said, this is a beautiful story. You have a good command of the written word, and that may well be the most in-character I've ever read Chib's crew. The dialogue is amazing as well.

The only qualm I have is that you got names mixed up; Cath is actually the dark-haired one, and Janet's the blonde. [Unless I watched ep. 2 wrong... \]

Anyway, you really captured the characters here. Keep writing. )