Reviews for The My Space Murder
Vicki-Jasper-Whitlock chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
i have to say i didn't like this :/ x
eye ree chapter 1 . 4/10/2009
holy shit

taking barbie playing alice to the extreme are we?

*snort* very different :) i liked it

i can totally picture her doing something like that... which is fucking weird but.. *shrugs* y'know :D
CourtneyHale chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
hahahah this was pretty funny, def OOC

but i think its something i can imagine Alice doing :P

pixie194 chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
i love it, its wicked good! but it would have been a little better with more background to it... any way it was so funny!

hellopants chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
OMG! you really made me smile! Alice is too funny! I love her! Oh gosh I'm laughing and thankfully the fam is in different parts of the house so they won't call me crazy! WOOT! This is good! Did you see I added your story to the cookie C2! Now I'm going to favorite it!
asterdarling chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
ROFL. I actually didn't think it was Jake - I had no idea who it was at first; I just didn't suspect poor Jacob.

"...I know she loved Bella like a sister, but she just keeps saying how sorry she is over and over again." I knew it was Alice right then. Alice is so kindhearted that she WOULD be sobbing and apologizing for the terrible deed.

No offense, but you kind of gave it away - to me, at least - with that line.

Hilarious story, though!

monomo chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
oh god remind not to move my bestfriend from my #1 spot for a boy again hahahah
NoLongerAnAccount00 chapter 1 . 7/11/2008
lol oh my you have no idea how true that is! i can picture that happening at my school! girls fight ALL THE TIME because "someone moved them fown on tehir top friends list" lol this stroy is a fictional example of why i refuse to have a top friends list! lol
x-aly-x chapter 1 . 7/11/2008
HAHA i dont mean to laugh but Alice changing her clothes was hilarious its just like Alice i triple loved Emmett with the folder and slamming things on the table detective Emmett on the case oh yeah im all for that you should have more stories with detective Emmett.

Love Aly
Bella-Latina chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
That was interesting - Alice really is crazy in this hehe - was this a one shot? because if not (even though i don't see what more you could do with this story) im putting it on alerts anyways
Angeliss chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
So I'm a forensic scientist? AWESOME! I have to say, I love the job you've given me. XD

This was hilarious. OOC, over the top, but hilarious nonetheless. I absolutely LOVE your ending, by the way. *sighs and shakes head* Over Myspace? I wouldn't be surprised if that happened someday...

Poor everyone.
harasnicole chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
At first, yeah, I did think that Jacob was the one who killed Bella. But when I got to the part about how the murderer had changed Bella's clothes and put make-up on her, my thoughts immediately went to Alice - and started laughing. That would be a typical Alice thing to do. :P

Great story. I loved it.
DelilahTCullen chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
naw i didnt think jake did it i was actually thinking Edward but wen they said she got changed im like 'wat the hell' then i thot it was Rosalie then i knew it was Alice

at first i just thot that alice knew who it was, not that she did it!

by the way that was really weird

good job

PEACE Delilah
fruitflyxo chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
It made me laugh! :DD

Probably because my friends and I often get upset about myspace top friends... HA!

I love being a detective though; every book I've read that has a Bethany was either a) a stuck up, mean know-it-all or b) a wannabe that obssessively follows the most popular girl in school.

YAY for a smart Bethany! :D

I'm still laughing... I must be going crazy. xD

But I really loved this! :D It is so like Alice to change Bella's clothes for the crime scene pictures- HAHA!


Bee! :)