Reviews for Cleaning Off
MesAmours chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
*Nose bleed* So hot! Thank you so much, you're the person who originally got me in to smutty and all its smutty, lemony goodness!
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
that was good keep it up
HeavenlyAngel34 chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
Loved it!
weflytothetardis chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
penslinger chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
I am so, so glad that there are people like you on . Stephanie Meyer is so much of an effing prude that she'd probably claw her eyes out after reading it and then drench herself with holy water. But...I like it. Great job! ;)
Lambertxxx chapter 1 . 12/21/2009
Hot Vamp father-son story
Laura chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
Great! Love this story line, please write more!
Cutekitty398 chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
That was a good fuck in this story
Briar Rose Lockhart chapter 1 . 6/21/2009! Omg1 That was awesomeness. Great job!
Joxa chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
I'm sorry, but I'm gonna have to flame you. It's not a story, it's more like a two or three-shot. Your punctution is good, but try to use more pronouns like "he". It is possible to over-use their names. I have to say that this makes my Hall of Fame, which is a pretty amazing feat. I just can't help but laugh every time I read it. I know people have given you a lot of crap about how vampires can't get erections because they don't have blood. Whatever people. If you do it right, vampires are effin' hot!{But here it's just halerious}
Ninja.Mkah chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
Oh my Carlisle. I think the sequel was better than the original.

Gunna get some people hot and bothered with that one.

- Mikkeh
matt chapter 1 . 3/27/2009
That was fantastical,

One of the best i read..]

good job.
kayleigh24 chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
jeej, sequal!
Ripper-Jack-Ripper chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
First I say damn you for to be continued, and second just some minor flaws with your vamps. one again they dont sweat two they dont blush (they kinda lack blood flow dont ask me how they get an erection or even move if they lack blood flow they r confusing and damn friken sexy creatures )three why were carlisle's eyes blue? i thought they were gold or black...but oh well again i loved it. -
carafob chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
really loving this...
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