Reviews for King's Night
Little Indulgence chapter 1 . 8/18/2017
Hahahaha I laughed so much!
zfj chapter 1 . 12/27/2016
Great one shot!
gabelou1991 chapter 1 . 6/15/2015
DarkVoid116 chapter 1 . 10/11/2013
Yet another great oneshot here. Gohan and Videl inadvertently having sex then becoming a semi-legitimate couple makes me happy.

The fact that it's from Videl's point of view makes it both better and worse in my opinion. Better because the it added emotion and kept, obviously, point of view clarity. Worse because we never get a glimpse into Gohan's mind...

The Hercule scene amuses me greatly- Hercule finding Gohan and relative proof that Gohan and Videl had sex then freaking out is totally reasonable, so excellent job there...

Great story.
mslegend92 chapter 1 . 6/21/2013
I look at the grammar, sentence construction, plot, writing style etc. and I like very much. The characterization of Videl especially was very good. It is a situation I can envisage happening and you did it well. It was a great read thank you for it!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
vbn45 chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
WOW- this story made me smile and laugh. I really enjoyed it!
Shadowhunter536 chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
great story. have you ever thought of a sequel
Itachi's apprentice chapter 1 . 12/13/2009
I need to pee. Ungracefully I park myself at the toilet seat and piss my whole bladder empty. Hmm, it hurts a bit. Funny. Must have kept it inside for far too long. I could hear the hallelujah choir as I release everything. My kidneys are pleased with me again. Might as well also perform a #2. Ahh, it feels like I just got rid of all the toxic in my body. I can finally start the day. It’s a good thing I am the only one in the room, it smells horrible after I take a dump. After I wipe my butt I pull up my sweatpants…

‘No, what if he can smell my poo?’

Great work. Those lines had me cracking up.

Slightly based on true events... Don't hold it against me too much.

I don't since something like that happen to me except I was in Gohan position, and it was the mother who caught us. And I can honestly say nothing happen;)
Shuutastic chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
Oh man. I died laughing.

Crude humor, but I love it.
ljv chapter 1 . 12/18/2008
Darling, I must say, if I could give this any award it would be the 'Most Re-read-able' award. I suppose after reading it several times it is about time to leave a review. Forgive the delay.

Quite amusing in some parts and the awkwardness is enduring but also quite relatable. Unfortunately, in most cases (at least to my experiences) waking up with somebody does not necessarily imply a relationship will follow. This plays on the fantasy wonderfully. Also waking up next to an athlete's body committed to the complete perfection of their art - Oh my goodness, I'm not sure I would let him leave.

Then the after affects, such as Erasa's bantering bring fond memories.

NekoUrsula chapter 1 . 11/13/2008
Absolutely loving Videl's reactions in the after morning drunken scenes. I like how you manage to throw very modern lingo in the dialouges without exagerating and making it trashy. it makes it a fun and an enjoyable read. although i must admitt the whole content made videl and gohan look very out of character. as other reviewers have said before me its extremely hard to imagine them in such a situation.

Good job!

Keep it up :)
Dr. Trunks Briefs chapter 1 . 10/8/2008
KageOkami-Kogo chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
That was great! So hilarious! I haven't laughed that hard in months! Great job! I loved this!
Space-Weazel chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
Haha, I love this story! Great pieces of prose like this are slowly making me live Videl a little more. I also have to admire your sense of humor. As I'm sure other have pointed out, you have a... shall we call it an awesome gift of writing dialog it definitely kept me entertained and makes me want to come back for more!
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