Reviews for Don't Look
CourseOfHonour chapter 4 . 3/8/2011
We can haz final part of the story, plz? :)
Lunar Kasumi chapter 6 . 7/22/2009
like fire! dude you're humor just sneaks up and takes a bite! i love love love it!

:LK
MinxBubbleOo chapter 6 . 5/28/2009
xD This was really funni!

I loved it, what an awkward convo to be faced with D!

Update soon, I love these little scenes )

MinxB
Sumi19 chapter 6 . 3/22/2009
Great :)

I would love to read more
XXXMystery chapter 3 . 3/21/2009
Wha! Na Taito? No Yamichi?

P.S. I wonder if Tai is telling the truth about not being bothered?
Crazy PurpleSage chapter 6 . 3/20/2009
Excellent! :D I like how you did from Takeru's pov. And the rock, paper, scissors, thing was hilarious. XD

I really like this chapter. :D
MinxBubbleOo chapter 5 . 3/15/2009
Aw now this was cute xD!

I cracked up all throughout this, pure genius D

Hope you write more soon,

Great work,

MinxB
Sumi19 chapter 5 . 3/15/2009
...so cute... :)
Crazy PurpleSage chapter 5 . 3/13/2009
Hehehehe, that was a very cute, funny, silly, ironic, hilarious, interesting scene. Great! :D
MinxBubbleOo chapter 4 . 11/14/2008
Well this is a little odd..but i like it!

Please update it soon! PLEEAASSE!
Mr. Penutt chapter 4 . 11/3/2008
... Well... I'm hooked. the first story is awesome, and the second story seems even better. Can't wait for the update.
Crazy PurpleSage chapter 3 . 8/15/2008
Okay, what happened in the first story though? They were both drunk and tentatively making out! Will they remember it in the morning, will they get together, realize how much they like each other, Yama avoid Tai like the plague?

Too many questions! XD

And are all these supposed to be Taitos/ Yamachis. Or will there be Sorato?

Well, I'm interested. Looking forward to the next part.

Oh, and by the way, you totally had me wanting a cup of hot cocoa by the first sentence. Yay, hot chocolate and marshmallows. Yum.

Awesome stories! ;D
Na-cat chapter 3 . 8/14/2008
I like theses first three chapters, the first two were cute. This third one looks like the start of something interesting :)
Maleysin chapter 3 . 8/12/2008
what? Taichi you poor thing... I love the kind of stories that make my chest clench. I have a feeling this one will be like that!
EachPeachPearPlum chapter 3 . 8/12/2008
so i've not read this one before. which i figure you knew, seeing as i've not reviewed it. and you're only getting one review so far, because i'm not feeling as altruistic as i do sometimes. and because i know my inane babble annoys you, so i'm trying to stay on topic.

i thought this was pretty funny. well, not this chapter, but the first two. and i'm currently mentally mocking Dai's intelligence. although i'm not really sure Tai is a whole lot smarter.

and i liked this chapter too. the beginning of a different story. and clearly the beginning of my worst enemy. i'm utterly utterly against Sorato. either of them with Tai is fine, but together? eww! and i assume that it's hardly your favourite thing either. so i'm guessing it's probably not going to stay as a Sorato. either way, i reckon the next chapter will be interesting. so another thing to add to my alert list. or i could just stick you on author alert. that would be a little more sensible...

so yeah. enough from me, i reckon. bye...
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