Reviews for A Night Out
Unbidden-Angel chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
I really loved it! I hadn't expected for Jake and Chance to be aliens!
trigger12 chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
Wow... I dont mean anthing offensive but your ideas keep getting wierder and wierder. Jake and Chance as alieans? you have one hell of an imagination... brill! It also seems you story looks way better in first person than in it would third. I think you should write more stories like this.

Trigger.
Jovianokami chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
Wow I so did not see that one coming! A JakexFeral one shot and the fact that Jake and Chance are from a other planet too! Think you do a other one like this?