Reviews for Closer
6strangeDOLL9 chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
kdfhis! fucking hot! and awesome! Best vampfic Ive ever read!
sasunaru2themax chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
FUCK This turned me on!...i'm such a freak :D mwahaha :P xxxxx
PurpleAmbitions chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
This was an awesome ItaSasu fanfic .
FrostyEyes chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
Wow, I totally loved this!

Sure they're OC but damn it really works in this one! And I really loved how you made their personalities. They're both pretty messed up, made it interesting.

Oh, and the way you wrote it, just wow. Since it's pretty long I partly expected that I'd be reading this forever but nope, all the detailing made it really fascinating. Really catching attention.

I don't even usually go for vampire things, but you made it 'realistic' enough so I loved even that too.

Just awesome work!
Aaliyanna's-SeventhHeaven chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
DUDE THIS FREAKING ROCKED I LOVED IT NICE JOB I USUALLY DONT APPRECIATE UCHUHACHEST THIS MUCH SO YEA U PRETTY MUCH ROCK HEHEH
Seraphinus chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
SO SO SO HOT!

Man, i loved this story. I don't usually read yaoi that much but this was awesome. so ooc with itachi but it was still cool, it's sexy when it's two brothers. :D
xXBunnehX3 chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
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Profound Yaoi chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
Ahh, I could have sworn I reviewd this the first time I read it!

I love this story! I don't know how many times I've read it. It's funny, it's cute and it's hot! Everything a fic should be! You're amazing!
Sheol chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
Wow, that was an awesome story. I can't believe it only has fifteen reviews! It is way too good to have so few.

There were only three things I disliked about the story: Itachi was WAY out of character, and the amount of swearing burdened the story to the extent that it was lacking a bit on adjectives/ adverbs that would have added to the story's description, and it was way too long to be a one shot (kept losing my place when I'd come back later to finish reading).

Either way, really good story. First story I ever read where Itachi was OOC in a non-annoying way. Usually it is OOC in an irritatingly sappy way, but this OOC Itachi actually had a cool personality. Still bugged me a little though, but only cause Itachi is my fav character (if you can relate to that?). I do have one question though. If Itachi likes Sasuke so much, why didn't he just have sex with him the first time Sasuke came on to him? Even if Itachi did it cause he was mad, you'd think he'd still end up getting hot and giving in...
kira-chan's imagination chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
agh -melts- this was absolutley amazing.. and i loved every minute of it!
Lady Orichima chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
Woah... Lotsa bad words, shamey shame! Do you write gay porn to get your frustration out or something? Either way... That was hot, I think you turned my older brother gay(he was reading it with me)
ClubSlut chapter 1 . 7/17/2008
WHEE.

ITS BACK UP.

Yes it was up ages ago but I forgot to review.

Great Paring.

Great Humor.

Great Sex.

What more you fucking want, hm?

I still say you make a sequel.

I shall nag you for the rest of your life, see you later ne?

I might come with you and Mathew in your car because you have better music than I do, rofl and my dad sucks shit
SherBear.Apparatus chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
Fucking.

Amazing.

x3
CrimsonKitsuneShinobi chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
One of the best things I have ever read. Love the humor, love the lemons (of course lol) XD. Also loved...well I just loved it all, wonderful work.
PinkNeonSocks chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
EMFG.

It's back up!

Uh.. yeah it was back up ages ago but whatever, you know why I couldn't review earlier.

Great as always, still can't get over the humor in this (yes, I read it again)

I still say you make a sequel!

Update soon x_x
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