|Reviews for A King's Curse|
| Tissue Face chapter 2 . 10/12/2009
I found this story harder to follow. I found myself drifting off.
I love the Norman Character and the connection between his blurting and Jareth. I think the hardest part for me to get my head around is the mercy to his followers. I am not sure that fits Jareth's character.
| Tissue Face chapter 1 . 10/12/2009
I didn't read the original such that it stayed with me. I like this rewrite it flows well. You really got into the main characters head in a way that make sense but you still have the edge that I think I didn't see clearly before that makes you uncertain about trusting him. I think the rewrite was excellent.
| Emma Corrin chapter 14 . 10/2/2009
This story was very well written!
I've never read the original, but have seen the movie, and love what you did with it :3
Can't wait to read the other stories you've written! 33
Keep up the good work ;D
| Trickstaanne chapter 14 . 8/9/2009
I feel sad D: but a dark Jareth seems strangely sexy. XDD
Anyway, I just wanted to say that I've been sorta looking for a prequel fic for Labyrinth for a while lol. Sorta new to the fandom and I was wondering why nobody really did a prequel of Labyrinth lol. Since Jareth was there in the beginning and stuff.
| Stacy Vorosco chapter 14 . 5/31/2009
OMG! I don't know whether to be excited or saddened at the thought of dark Jareth
Guess I'll just have to go read what you have for the sequel and see, huh?
| Stacy Vorosco chapter 8 . 5/31/2009
OMG that was so cool! Matt is Hoggle!
lol sorry. I got a kick out of that
gonna keep reading now. great job so far
| Kaidou chapter 14 . 4/13/2009
Awsomeness! Loved it!
| lollie-rox-my-sox chapter 12 . 2/7/2009
You didn't put in my favorite line Dx
Ah well. It was a very good read, loved the story and how it wasn't just Labyrinth re-written!
Nothing? Nothing Tra-la-la!
| bunniko chapter 14 . 12/26/2008
Wow, I really loved your explanations for Jareth's behaviors! Really interesting. I also like this idea of the Dark Jareth replacing the insecure, self-loathing Jareth. Thanks for such an engaging read. Sorry for the really short review, but my brain is fried from too much partying last night. But I promised to let you know how I liked it by the end. :)
| bunniko chapter 7 . 12/25/2008
I am, it is fair to say, terrible about writing reviews. Despite how much I enjoy getting them. Well, actually, I often enjoy seeing that they are there and then am terribly disappointed when I open them and all they say is: MORE! I suppose that is flattering . . . but it cancels out my drive to write. So, I can understand your position, wanting to know what we think of your re-writes and only getting silence until you complain.
As for the story, so far, chapter 7 is my favorite. I really do love how you are fleshing Jareth out. I despise Nicole. But I do love the way you have set him up for such pain. I can just imagine myself in his shoes, ready to show myself to this person who has overtaken my every thought and then WHAM! I love even more that he plots to punish Matt for attracting Sarah's attention.
I did not have the opportunity to read your original work, but I am quite inspired by the joy you are finding in improving your story. I have intentions to do that to one of mine, but when I sit down to work on it, I get bored or anxious. I discovered you through your friend BK I got it's profile after reading all of her ST work posted so far. Which reminds me that I really need to leave her a review as well.
Anyway, you probably won't hear from me every chapter, but I will be sure to leave you at least a review at the end. Take care!
| J Luc Pitard chapter 14 . 11/25/2008
Wow! I really enjoyed that look at the way Jareth allowed his boredom to morph into obsession. Now he has a dark twin? I've always wanted an evil twin myself...
Looking forward to more from you!
| Regnig-oftheblackforest chapter 14 . 9/8/2008
Dark Jareth! Cue horror movie violin screech!
Awesome story, can't wait to read the sequal!
| trallgorda chapter 14 . 9/8/2008
OH MY GOSH! The potential for the next story is incredible! This chapter was incredible! Heck, the whole story's incredible! I can't wait for the sequel! (Dances wildly around room in jubilant celebration) There's a sequel! SEQUEL!
| Celestialdome chapter 14 . 9/8/2008
wow, just wow. Who knew his internal conflict would go this far? I shall be awaiting the arival for the sequel. *goes to get a bowl of popcorn, ready to be eaten when the sequel goes up*
| megumisakura chapter 3 . 9/4/2008