Reviews for Undertow
sophieranier14 chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
That was beautiful! I love how you always referred to him as "the boy". And Lily's spontaneity was really fun! Great story!
FlubberyFlobberworms chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
very nice! Loved how you wrote it all in third person :)
Amanda chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
loved your story! maybe you should put in more dialog so that you could have a feel of being there - but other than that well done .
siriuslyjames chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
damn cute :)
Lucky1111 chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
Another great fic! I love this line:

"But, nonetheless, she's always been a bit of a liar with a cruel streak that occasionally alarms her."

I think that's the Lily I've always pictured. Not that pure virginial type that most fics try to potray, but the girl who was friends with Severus, the one who tried to hide her smile when his underpants were shown, arrogant in her own right, but deep down, still a good person. Well done!
Franklet chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
This is very sweet! I love it :) I liked the different style - it's something I tried before and never quite got right, but you pull it off masterfully :D
Hopeless23 chapter 1 . 12/21/2009
i loved it! great one shot!
wildwriterrr chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
this is really good ohh please b a seuel
quill.is.mightier chapter 1 . 11/18/2009
good job
coca.cola.916 chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
i really liked the way you wrote this story. definitely a terrific oneshot. and original too. keep it up! i'm going to check out your page to see what other stories you've got...

:)
tasha27 chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
wow, i liked that alot. :)

haha i liked how you added in the little detail of James blushing when he sees Lily in her underwear.

cutee!
BurningIce22 chapter 1 . 7/24/2008
this is really sweet. So optimistic.
An Aspiring Author chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
i loved it! i absolutely adored your pov- very masterfully done! this is so cute! fabulous job!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
that was WONDEFUL. really, really good. very well-written. good job!
Knight 03 chapter 1 . 7/13/2008
That was so sweet! I loved it!
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