Reviews for As of Late
Minty Chinchilla chapter 6 . 9/18/2008
I loved it! Poor Gwen. She's gonna have nightmares... XD
laceypinkdream chapter 6 . 9/14/2008
0.o J.T. and cash -twitch- but hot ben is getting fucked in the car WO
Desdemona Kakalose chapter 6 . 9/13/2008
Oh, are they now?


Hey man, you might not want to use the word 'cup' in those scenes. It kinda jerks us out of the rhythm, y'know?

'side from that, great chapter.
Regenschein chapter 6 . 9/12/2008
*drools* Damn! That was the best! Note that I didn't say 'good' or 'great' or awesome, THAT WAS THE BEST!

Keep up the good work! .
SilentKiller1 chapter 6 . 9/8/2008
poor gwen
SilentKiller1 chapter 5 . 9/8/2008
nice going ben
used romance chapter 6 . 9/8/2008
Hahaha, well, that was fun. I can totally imagine that last scene perfectly, the car rocking... LOL. Poor Gwen.

I wish this was longer, but in all, I was satisfied with the BeVin. There wasn't much plot to it, except for the development of the relationship... I really liked it though. You kept the characters in perfect condition, no major lapses in what I would expect from them, and you kept this complete realistic.

Thank you so much, I loved reading every part. You made my day. :]
Wolf Demon Queen chapter 6 . 9/7/2008
*dies laughing* I LOVED! THAT WAS FUNNEH!
Enski chapter 6 . 9/7/2008
._. Image burned into head... TTHANKKS D: XD

:D Aww, poor Gwen. So much shock/trauma/whathecrap!

I enjoyed that greatly, much thanks :3

(Oh yeah, I watched all of Alien X / There better be an episode where he just doesn't fix a fecking dam! DD: Or I'll go complain on my blog XD)

Keep on writing~

- Enski
realityfling18 chapter 6 . 9/7/2008
heyy! i really liked this story! haha. poor gwen. i loved it though!XD
Feliciano Luigina Holmes chapter 6 . 9/7/2008
oh my god!

creepy... that was good i liked it
chop4tess chapter 6 . 9/7/2008
Haha, that was great, i could just see the look on Gwen's face when she came back and saw those two making out! XD Shame its the last chp but oh well, i'll have good dreams tonight
Rum and Coke chapter 6 . 9/7/2008
ah that was awesome! lol poor gwen. great job! -
Dario Argento Syndrome chapter 6 . 9/6/2008
I loved this smutty chapter especially when Gwen saw Kevin & Ben nude!
BloodyWhiteRose chapter 5 . 9/2/2008
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