|Reviews for D Pickup lines|
| Devil Wolf Girl chapter 5 . 3/28
U really should continue this. It is so freaken funny!
| Nickirem.Tetsuya.Zoldyck chapter 5 . 3/23/2014
Yes, sweetie. A week's time... More like 300… _ please update!
| Duckie-Kun chapter 5 . 2/4/2014
lol poor kanda wont be cured yet ;p
| SayoShihoinXKohAyamerei chapter 4 . 8/1/2013
KANDA GOT KIDNAPPED BY FANGIRLS!
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
"Excuse me, but I think I dropped something…My jaw!" ('That's what I've been trying to tell you all along!')
Well, at least those were similar enough...? Compared to the others, anyway. *shrugs*
| Muffin-Bunny chapter 1 . 3/6/2012
I love it! Just how inappropriate they sound in context of what they're saying (and out of context too...) Poor Miranda... And poor Lavi too I guess, all fear the panda pwnage!
| KingRabbit chapter 5 . 8/22/2011
Update or I hall riot. Lolz just kidding. Anyway, if there's gonna be a riot it'll be over how funny this is. My gosh I'm dying here! Can't wait for the next chapter!
| xxjaegrrr chapter 5 . 8/2/2011
i want to see Yuu's pretty face with a nice slap mark on it...
im also impatient...
so please hurry!
| Ining-Batong chapter 1 . 7/23/2011
Dude this is freakin' hilarious! Pick up lines are ridiculous but too funny to have!
I love the baker and slamming a door ones, the ones Allen said in Komui's office!
| Dai ryuu chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
HAHAHAHA OMG LOL! That was soo funny XD And where did you find all those silly pick-up lines? O_o ROFLMAO
| mochamochi chapter 4 . 6/20/2011
This is pure geniusxDDD This made me lol so much! Great job!
| strawhat-alchemist chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
Oh my God. LOLOLOLOL. Love Lavi's last one.
| BokuwaToriniNaru chapter 5 . 12/30/2010
I have enjoyed reading this fanfiction SO MUCH! and these pick up lines literally have me rolling around in my chair laughin! aghahaha
| Nicole chapter 5 . 12/12/2010
I stick my middle finger up at this "chapter". Damn you! UUUUPDAAAAATE its been foreverrrr!
| Emriel chapter 5 . 11/26/2010
T . T almost 2 years now Y...Y