Reviews for Waking
naash chapter 3 . 5/25/2020
god that was a painful read. you made me tear up and my heart aches so much. gosh that was painful yet wonderful

i write angst myself and i understand the need for tragedy. sometimes it is the best ending

your writing style is simple. you dont use a lot of imageries or flowery words. its raw and straightforward and yet still delivers an abundance of feeling

your writing has a lot of heart which is something that is hardest to emulate.

thank you so much for this story.
Guest chapter 3 . 5/18/2020
Chapter 2 and 3 are the same?
Anyway... you killed me. Killed. Me. Dead.
When I saw those extra chapters I thought you were going to make and alternative ending, a sad one and a happy one... holy shit
I was crying at 4 am, and I had to meditate a little to write something with my mind clear tbh xD
I really liked it. It's not an usual story to read, very original in my opinion!
Hope to read more from you! PLEASE I MISS YOU!
I NEED YOUR NEJITEN STORIES!
Lots of love!
recey2010 chapter 2 . 5/17/2020
I cried
hannahzerofive chapter 3 . 5/17/2020
Ah I see it’s still a tragedy... this hurts
hannahzerofive chapter 1 . 5/17/2020
Ion my god you updated it! I don’t know what you did but I hope she wakes up!
Guest chapter 3 . 5/17/2020
Why is chapter 2&3 the same? Anyway i’m so happy that your back ! I always reread all your nejiten stories and i hope you make another one again ! I missed your amazing writing
Shavock chapter 1 . 6/9/2019
Beautiful story, but sad. I was completely sure that she'd wake up. But you did the oposite. Beautiful story, as I said before. Cannot find more words to wirte 3
lala1224 chapter 1 . 4/23/2018
You ruined my life with this. I was SO convinced that she would wake up! Sakura said she would ! I can’t believe you just broke my heart into a million pieces. It’s was a great story but I’m soooo sad!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/7/2016
actually I did and it wrecked me because if you write something for nejitens fans than you should think about how they will feel after read your fanfic. I can stand that shes dead (no, not really, I cant, Im depressed) but Neji is getting married? no words for that , thanks
I LoVe TeNtEn chapter 1 . 3/20/2014
deym you men... T-T I CRIED SOO MUCH BECAUSE AT THE START SAKURA SAID SHELL BE FINE AND SHELL WAKE UP SOBI WAS. YAYYY BUT THEN BAM SHE DIED TTT-TTT THE WORST PART HE IS GETTING MARRIED I WAS LIKE OH SHIT! THT DESTROYED MY HEART PRETTY GOOD AND IT MEANS... I LOVE IT T-T it was a good angst T-T just couldn't stop crying T-T
Brownstar92 chapter 1 . 5/17/2013
Nooooooo! Why, why did she have to die! No no no no no! I just balled my eyes out! :(
shimmeringbluelight chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
My eyes started to brim with tears after I read this part: ..."I'm tired, Neji. I want to go home." She whispered...

And officially bawled out when I reached this part: ..."Except the heart monitor no longer beeped."

Very sad, yet very beautiful.
vajallie chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
You made me cry :( T_T
Young Goodman Brown chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
what the hell is wrong with me? i meant to review this ages ago-i suck T_T

anyways, i wanted to let you know that i LOVED both this story and "waiting"-i think you did a fabulous job of building up to an inevitable (but still tragic!) conclusion. the dream scene was lovely, if not haunting. i get the feeling that it's neji's mind feverishly trying to find some measure of closure ;_; poor neji still has to cope with might-have-beens and empty futures. the hopelessness of the situation and neji's irrational faith made me tear a little, not to mention neji's pain at finally moving on :'(

most tenten death fics revolve around the idea of "tenten dies and suddenly neji realizes that she's pretty and stuff and that he's in love with her but it's too late now oh nooooooo" (i'm guilty of a couple of them...) but you've inspired me to work with the idea of a neji who fears losing his best friend and disrupting the status quo-and waits until it's too late. i hope you don't mind if i work with the tenten coma idea as a subplot, but please let me know if it bothers you at all _;;

either way, i loved loved loved this :D cheers!
A-Caged-Bird-Set-Free chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
wow that was a good story but really did u HAVE TO MAKE IT SO SAD!

look i'm cryin' me eyes out here, but really couldn't u have made tenten live?

but apart from that i really enjoyed readin' it, keep up the good work :D
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