Reviews for Through the Summer Months
Nuna Fan chapter 8 . 8/16/2017
This is so beautiful!
thehungergamer12 chapter 3 . 1/9/2013
Ha ha punch in the stomach .
icansoar chapter 8 . 3/9/2011
Very adorable and I especially loved that last bit where one of his students interrupted them XD
Samantha chapter 3 . 5/12/2010
Guys, AWESOME Nevile/Luna song: "The Ballad of Nevile and Luna" by 'The Remus Lupins'. It ROCKS!
Samantha chapter 8 . 5/12/2010
LOVE it! When I heard JKR pared Luna off with some unknown,stupid,idiotic git, I just couldnt believe it. And Nevile and Hannah, well, they just dont FIT! NevileXLuna 4ever!
Socratic Irony chapter 8 . 4/26/2010

This was beautiful. Short but still very.. beautiful. Wish I find this earlier to support you when you were writing this. I wish there were more Luna and Neville fics out there.. Thank you for writing this :D
fledge chapter 8 . 4/7/2010
Thanks for the insight into the workings of Luna's - and Rolf's - minds. Old Rolf seems to be quite a sensitive character, which he clearly must be, going on expedtions with Luna in the fist place, and indeed Neville owes him big. Quite endearing - and typical - of Luna to take the decisive step. You find that quite often, don't you, that people can do the most heroic things concerning "action" (for lack of a better word, and horribly chicken out as soon as it's about (romantic) feelings.

On a different note:

The sky was blue, the trees were green, and the sunlight wafted down through a gentle breeze.

While I appreciate the rhythmic flow of the sentence, as well as the almost-ryme, I feel the colour adjective are a bit flat really; I'm sure you can do better than that. But as this whole chapter is something of a perfunctory exercise, it's understandable you haven't put all your heart in it.

I DO HOPE YOU ARE NOT GIVING UP WRITING (of any kind, and of fanfiction in Particular) ALTOGETHER!
fledge chapter 7 . 4/5/2010
So sorry to hear about your steam running out, and very conscientious toat least give a short summary of what you had planned. Anyway - you certainly should have included some scene where Luna sees the light at last - that final meeting at the end comes very much out of the blue.
Bloodsucker94 chapter 6 . 8/4/2009
I wish Neville had punched Rolf at the party, the dick.
DianaDiamond chapter 6 . 6/18/2009
Excellent! What happened to Neville in the end though..who did he marry? Did he ever marry? Tell me!
Luanna255 chapter 5 . 6/8/2009
Love Actually! (Unless that was unintentional. But the lines are almost exactly the same...)
Melora chapter 6 . 5/26/2009
This story is great! I can’t wait to read more.

If you’re interested in further creative writing, you may want to check out: w. geocities sapienti_university_of_magic (no space before or after geocities.) Thanks!

Either way, good luck with your writing!

Melora Brockert, SUM student
kz and the snazzy plotbunnies chapter 6 . 5/23/2009
oh! poor neville! he finally gets the courage to tell a girl that he loves her, and she's engaged! what terrible luck that man seems to have! terrible, terrible luck! hmm... i'm wondering... what had he splinched? please update soon?

NevemTeve chapter 6 . 5/21/2009
'Long awaited' indeed... I really would like what's going to happen now...
Katie Hodgkins chapter 6 . 5/21/2009
Fantastic, and so well written! Your characterisation is brilliant, and I can't wait for the next chapter.
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