Reviews for The Wedding Night
Aros wife isabella chapter 3 . 1/13
can you please put more sumtt in here please thanks
Elleri North chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
In Chapter 2, "dido" is spelled wrong. It's "ditto". I just thought I might point that out, because I used to spell it out like that all the time. Wonderful story, though. :)
RowanBronze chapter 3 . 5/2/2012
Very sweet! Love this, and I can imange this happening on esme island!
Siriusmunchkin chapter 3 . 2/16/2010
Well written. Very tasteful, beautiful and romantic. I can imagine most of that happening in the bedroom on Esme's Island.

Harry would only care because he'd be thinking you were cheating on him with Cedric.
Lily'sBookstore chapter 3 . 12/27/2009
sorry, but if yoyu don't like pennis and vagina why don't you use dick, cock, pussy?
Lacy-Jane chapter 3 . 9/13/2009
Fantastic story :)
He-dazzles-mm chapter 3 . 4/14/2009
Loved it - delicious! Thanks for taking your time and building up to it. Very sexy...
sicklittlesuicide chapter 3 . 3/10/2009

That was pretty amazing.

Very hot.

But not too smutty.


Very nice.
slimjimjerky chapter 3 . 9/10/2008
very sexy!

and i'm glad you didn't use penis and vagina.

the other synonyms were better :)
JenRar chapter 3 . 8/23/2008
That was VERY erotic! Loved it. Thanks! If you write more, I'll definitely read it!
fenrir's.little.girl chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
boo underage reader here! lol

now before you get angry or anything i'd just like to point out that i'm here purely to get tips on how to write this stuff myself. see the problem is, i can write about rape really well but everytime i try towrite sex i just end up giggling and then tearing up the paper. so have any advice?

oh and by the way if you think that will corrupt me, you should try waking up in the middle of the night while staying round your 23yr old brothers house and go to get a drink, only to find his flat matewanking to some porn on his phone! now that gives you nightmares!
dazzled01218 chapter 3 . 8/6/2008
Yes.. why not do it with such Calvin-Klein-ish-model-100-year-old-vampire indeed! lmao

great story. ]
Bloodapple123 chapter 3 . 8/6/2008
That was really hot and awesome!
Jolione chapter 3 . 7/17/2008
*Clap clap clap clap*

Very good, exellent! Very.. urmm... entertaining. Dw I won't be sick On watching things like that make me sick reading about it makes me laugh.

Great work

:D Jemma
Jolione chapter 2 . 7/17/2008
Urm. What shall I say.. Nice work.. I'm full of laughter now.. Its really good. I will continue now..

:D Jemma
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