Reviews for Unwelcome Past and True Eternity
sholtsclaw698 chapter 23 . 4/12
loved the story! you did so very well with it
Sarah Amin chapter 4 . 9/14/2015
why would he change her and leave .. it kinda defeats the purpose ?
Motherof8 chapter 11 . 2/1/2014
Alice is such a bully
Motherof8 chapter 8 . 2/1/2014
Hope she stays mad and stops being a pushover
Motherof8 chapter 7 . 2/1/2014
She shouldn't forgive him so easily
Motherof8 chapter 3 . 2/1/2014
Is he out of his mind? Leaving her like this? What a complete moron!
ladeerelli chapter 23 . 10/18/2013
I enjoyed your story. Thank you.
twivampsalvatore chapter 24 . 7/12/2012
Love the story!
AlinaBee chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
Nightclub? Really?
WildObsession23 chapter 5 . 5/15/2011
I love how you ended off this chapter. Smart idea! :)
Vampfan1 chapter 21 . 5/10/2011
Ok. twice now you have eluded to lemons in this story. At the end of the chapter in the A/N you wrote "Lemons there at the end." Let me just go on the record as saying that alluding to sex or even stating they had it IS NOT a not even a lime. In the world of FF licking someone's bottom lip doesnt even register on the " Citrus Radar". I don't remember what this story is rated but it shouldn't be M. I'm not saying you should write lemons but I am saying you shouldn't refer to what you have written as containing one. You confuse the reader...As in "What? did I miss something? There was no sex in there" OR you state early on there will be lemons and then don't deliver anything close. The story is great and I'm really enjoying the plot and its many twists. I believe you can write a good story without lemons. I just also believe you shouldn't label something a lemon when its not. I'm just sayin...
wafflemonster chapter 24 . 3/30/2011
Yayayay! So good!
ashley.ilub chapter 6 . 3/5/2011
I'm usually nice to new writers but this story is bad. Bad plot, bad characters, bad setting, bad time frames, just bad. There is nothing good about this story it is poorly written, confusing and unrealistic of the characters.
nightshadowlife chapter 24 . 3/4/2011
I LOVE this story! You did an amazing job!
ashleighalexanderX chapter 11 . 3/2/2011
serioulsy! this Alice is doing my head in! I actual hate her! shes a pushy bitch
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