Reviews for Unwelcome Past and True Eternity
Izzy chapter 3 . 1/7
It's called a neck brace (I think).
Debbie Hicks chapter 23 . 12/7/2016
Epliouge two:
then suddenly Angela they called her was BITTEN By Alien rattlesnakes was Executed with the best friends with us with the both and galactic allies then you hold as all of neweborn erase memoreied Blazed from the here brought forth reported the newborns are bitten by the Vulcan rattlesnakes erased memories of their own human lives good they will be so sick thern blown apart bring the bodies each both they have a newborn what newborn Anelina they cal;led her Angela is gifted in mind control is her planetary gift with best friends surrderen That found accused then blacked out then too latre EXECUTED By Felix the screams of us with them blown from here this newborns are special then it was time split lost the need to breed at all with remains of sememen/sperm with egg shatterd thenuking from here then the Seer found no pulse heartbeat deactivated but her moans was airless without sacs anym,ore her gift came as Animal speech but was Animal telepathy oh my god what they done to her oh god you got to help me i can't go home as a Vampire i need top be human again then bloasting frely with us poped then brougfht here then they reported they brren punished for this her gift is both can speak to animals time split them that ourselves were Immortal unified What happened she acted human trained and taught herself oh my god we adopt them that her first hunt came too swift so they into fifty states then blasting from here then popped from history and existance burst from here blazing from here then taken as all of bodies then suddenly had them killed now made but pierced immortasls as all of them freed from help from the gods and godddeses made Angela very drop dead beautfiul like a Wild exotica dancer the venom was from both then suddenly was mated you guessed it Seth a Werwwolf they had eight donated kids so the very as all of were hybrids of both planets our coverup story they were half-human and Half-Klingon thgen blacked out with the kids were not normal but popped freely 229 years stayin' alive to sing one more time bopping to the max they as all of them vanished then murdered reported they have as all mixed race children are different they are dead with them bring them that was it as all of them summoned by alien commands of the hosts transformed us/them into Kindred means God's shadowhuunters born from the violent acts of murder and sin wwrre very special assassins and warriors are purged of sin who are trained of both who are not mortal walked like deities in day and night were very spiritual but religious beings wre acolytes were priestessses and priests then the bodies were very far too old far more ancient but elderly then suddenly it really did but alter our memories as all had not aged a lot popped frely were more then shattering then brpought in here they have more than as all of their warriors are wiped out then murdered releaed more of as all of them suddenly the kids were families followed now too late they all of thenm lost families of illnesses and diseaes then then blastoing from here snapped the loom the vanished now three animals followed but freed then took off then then killed then that Earth was differentSupernatural beings followed wwere brought in here now too late killed then then reported they never see or heard us they all of them burst frely are not alive bring them that was it the bodies as all of them murdered of the very as all of them exploding more Vampires then it caused us to stop death of the hosts thern lost that from here then the seer reported where are we in our vessel but deported the things then reached it landed then both blown apart with very cramped planets then with more from Earth then suddenly exploding then never existed again but suddenly came too late bodies as all of very way more monstrous as all of galactic races with the Vulcans then then but more Vampires as all of them exploding freely then sudenly overcrowded with more then too late exploding of the blood their children were so hideous fled like Martians horrified by Lauren's powers then reported to the Volturi of the very as all of more monstrously addions to our both:Extraterrestrials were fiercer warriors then lost the need to breed at all myself sang a line I am the ending the beginning I Bring order to Chaos sounded like the worldwide famously actress known as Alice Krige who was the Borg Queen you are assilmated to our culture then blasrted frely then we were so silvery white Holy crap oh no then that ourselves were much stronger than normal but suddenly too late they Volturi wrre furious of us adding more members wewre banned from Earth at all.
sholtsclaw698 chapter 23 . 4/12/2016
loved the story! you did so very well with it
Sarah Amin chapter 4 . 9/14/2015
why would he change her and leave .. it kinda defeats the purpose ?
Motherof8 chapter 11 . 2/1/2014
Alice is such a bully
Motherof8 chapter 8 . 2/1/2014
Hope she stays mad and stops being a pushover
Motherof8 chapter 7 . 2/1/2014
She shouldn't forgive him so easily
Motherof8 chapter 3 . 2/1/2014
Is he out of his mind? Leaving her like this? What a complete moron!
ladeerelli chapter 23 . 10/18/2013
I enjoyed your story. Thank you.
twivampsalvatore chapter 24 . 7/12/2012
Love the story!
AlinaBee chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
Nightclub? Really?
WildObsession23 chapter 5 . 5/15/2011
I love how you ended off this chapter. Smart idea! :)
Vampfan1 chapter 21 . 5/10/2011
Ok. twice now you have eluded to lemons in this story. At the end of the chapter in the A/N you wrote "Lemons there at the end." Let me just go on the record as saying that alluding to sex or even stating they had it IS NOT a not even a lime. In the world of FF licking someone's bottom lip doesnt even register on the " Citrus Radar". I don't remember what this story is rated but it shouldn't be M. I'm not saying you should write lemons but I am saying you shouldn't refer to what you have written as containing one. You confuse the reader...As in "What? did I miss something? There was no sex in there" OR you state early on there will be lemons and then don't deliver anything close. The story is great and I'm really enjoying the plot and its many twists. I believe you can write a good story without lemons. I just also believe you shouldn't label something a lemon when its not. I'm just sayin...
wafflemonster chapter 24 . 3/30/2011
Yayayay! So good!
ashley.ilub chapter 6 . 3/5/2011
I'm usually nice to new writers but this story is bad. Bad plot, bad characters, bad setting, bad time frames, just bad. There is nothing good about this story it is poorly written, confusing and unrealistic of the characters.
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