|Reviews for Land and Sea|
| geohen chapter 1 . 12/9/2017
Well written. I have been going back and reading some of these older stories. This is a good start to one that I wish the writer would finish
| FanFreak01 chapter 1 . 5/13/2017
This is a great first chapter! I've always wondered what would happen if someone spotted one of the girls.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
please write more please awesome story
| h2ogirl805 chapter 1 . 10/18/2011
I know it has been like 3 years but this story is awesome and i think you should continue it. One of the best stories on Fanfiction:D
| Zandaya chapter 1 . 9/14/2011
I know this is super old, but this is a really good start. I wish you'd continue.(:
| Storm Warning chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
O sounds exciting so far! please update!
| LadyBluePhoenix chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
This a really good story, please update.
| cherryblossomjen chapter 1 . 10/8/2008
I love that this has actual suspense, and a plot that involves more than just relationships with boys. Your portrayal of the girls is in character as well.
I hope you decide to continue this. I'd be interested to see what kind of obstacles are still to come.
One thing I noticed, because I've made the same mistake before, is that a few times you have 'your right' and 'your on' in stead of "you're right..." and so on. That little apostraphe makes a difference but it's easy to forget. :)
| crj0703 chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
| ZeraWeasley chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
| PrimaJ887 chapter 1 . 8/1/2008
HI! I say UPDATE! UPDATE! & 1 more thing UPDATE! Its a realy good story! :)
| MakinTheMostOfLife chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
I really want to know what happens, please update!
| Warriors girl 1 chapter 1 . 7/26/2008
good start update soon pleasee
| Ai to Kofuku chapter 1 . 7/25/2008
| Dark Blazing Phoenix chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
Hey, good start.
I think that i will write a H2O: JAW fanfic now.
Keep up the good work.